u/Just-Weird1786

I recently started an anonymous poetry Substack called Vesper.

A few recent poems are:

• The Small Humiliation of Leaving
• The Women in My Family Keep Knives
• The Rich Have No Country

I’d genuinely love feedback from people who read or write poetry. I’m especially interested in whether the poems feel sharp and memorable, or whether any lines feel too explained!

Here’s the Substack: https://substack.com/@vesperverse

Thanks for reading.