u/Kal_eido_scope

Hi! I'm translating the lyrics to Fenian into English for an assignment in my translation studies class, and as part of the process we have to get our translations reviewed by a native or more experienced speaker. I don't have any around me currently, so would anyone be willing to look over my translation? I just need a short comment and some corrections.

I did already post in r/gaeilge but figured there might be someone here too willing to help me out.

GRMA!