u/Kindly-Somewhere-566

Went to Melbourne to see family and decided to go for a walk around to find some graffiti and stumbled apon this drainage basin i guess you could call it with cone of the biggest and most crazy pieces i've ever seen along with other stuff that look like tube been there for years. These were some of my favourites from what took pictures off mind you also the first 2 to 3 and like at least 3 metres tall

i'm not sure which one i like best so i want options onto which one people think loos the best and any crits or ideas or tips are much appreciated

The first photo is the original

start this while i was at school. i personally really like it but i feel like something off or wrong just not sure what

im not sure if i should keep developing this style or change to something. else. any tips and comments would be great

did this during class a couple of days ago. I'm not to happy with the sizing especially with the s looking a lot smaller than the rest and the e looking bigger. This is on that i took my time on do any feedback and crits would be great as well as tips on what i could do to improve on as well as flow as i have no clue what to connect if i was to make it connect.