u/Kitsune136

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hi everyone! I am a junior applying to college and have just fimished my first draft of my Common App essay. I would love to share it with someone and explain myself a bit and see if they learn anything about me/if it would work for admissions.

My starting sentence is : "I've got a bone to pick with hide-and-seek." LMK if you wanna read and give some advice! I want as much critique as possible