u/Kristofferkol

[FEEDBACK] "Bob's Burgers" spec script (56 pages)

Hi! I have recently gotten into screenwriting and just finished up my first spec script. I'd appreciate some feedback on this. Thanks for the time :)

"A Low Paying Delivery Bob"

Logline: Bob has to start delivering his own food to compete with the new local food delivery service, while the kids go on strike.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lLw5vqVes9A5xW9zTf7zZOCBTp03Pn48/view?usp=sharing

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u/Kristofferkol — 2 days ago

[FEEDBACK] "Bob's Burgers" spec script (56 pages)

Hi! I have recently gotten into screenwriting and just finished up my first spec script. I'd appreciate some feedback on this. Thanks for the time :)

"A Low Paying Delivery Bob"

Logline: Bob has to start delivering his own food to compete with the new local food delivery service, while the kids go on strike.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lLw5vqVes9A5xW9zTf7zZOCBTp03Pn48/view?usp=sharing

reddit.com
u/Kristofferkol — 2 days ago