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[Complete] [114k] [Speculative Literary] Eloquence
Hi all! Looking for some honest reader reactions to my third novel, a speculative literary work that I've recently finished developmentally editing.
Blurb: A first-person account of a world where humanity loses language and much of its associated cognition, causing a truly global aphasia. We follow a stubborn, lone linguist crossing the Americas in search of a solution, even as silence may be growing in his own mind.
Excerpt: As an engineer, I have created my own online tools for writing and beta-sharing this novel. Here is a link to the beta-reading platform on my personal website, with the password 'sneakpeek' you'll be able to read the first three chapters. If you'd like to keep going, I'll set you up with a proper account where you can view and comment on the whole manuscript!
Feedback: I would want to have my whole manuscript read, unless you truly find it terribly dull. However, there's no need for in-depth (especially not line-level) feedback; I have yet to do a proper line editing pass. Instead, I have a 10 min questionnaire I'm sharing with people at the end. The aforementioned beta reading software also has two short optional questions at the end of each chapter that it would be nice to have answered, plus the ability to freely select and comment wherever you might desire.
I can also provide the book straight up via PDF or ePub form.
Timeline: I'm looking for a roughly one-month turnaround! (Nov 1st)
Content Warnings: pandemic / mass death (largely off-page, not graphic), cognitive decline and language loss, guns and threatened violence, captivity / forced labor, childbirth, an autism 'cure' storyline and some dated language.
Swaps: I have (limited) availability to critique swap, but if you're interested in just reading that works too! I'm happy to swap with the following content: sci-fi (esp. civilizational), thriller, speculative, historical, low fantasy. No horror, gore, or adult-focused content please!