I have a gift: I can write good horror scripts but can't write endings nor the thrills and chills before the ending.

I have a gift: I can write good horror scripts but can't write endings nor the thrills and chills before the ending.

Outjerked again.

u/LisleAdam12 — 8 days ago

Worried that Warren "museum" can cause devil babies. Help!

Maybe there are such things as stupid questions?

u/LisleAdam12 — 2 months ago

Mother of Flies is better than Undertone

Undertone had an obnoxious info dump (with much of the info being unnecessary, but I suppose it was supposed to quickly and easily provide characterization), got interesting, then repetitive, then didn't know how to end so had an unclear (not "open," just unclear) finish. Almost as bad as the ending of The Innkeepers.

Mother of Flies had a lot of awkward dialogue that was not delivered so well for the first half or so, but the visuals were great and the story constantly developed (though sometimes slowly). The last half hour is great, and it's clear exactly what's going on with the ending (though it's a bit drawn out and not especially surprising but completely satisfying).

NOTE: This is a personal opinion and I'm not out to yuck anybody's yum, so don't take this as a personal attack should you disagree.

Don't be uncivil unless you can be very funny while doing it.

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u/LisleAdam12 — 3 months ago
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Mother of Flies is better than Undertone

Undertone had an obnoxious info dump (with much of the info being unnecessary, but I suppose it was supposed to quickly and easily provide characterization), got interesting, then repetitive, then didn't know how to end so had an unclear (not "open," just unclear) finish. Almost as bad as the ending of The Innkeepers.

Mother of Flies had a lot of awkward dialogue that was not delivered so well for the first half or so, but the visuals were great and the story constantly developed (though sometimes slowly). The last half hour is great, and it's clear exactly what's going on with the ending (though it's a bit drawn out and not especially surprising but completely satisfying).

NOTE: This is a personal opinion and I'm not out to yuck anybody's yum, so don't take this as a personal attack should you disagree.

Don't be uncivil unless you can be very funny while doing it.

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u/LisleAdam12 — 3 months ago