u/Little-Form9374

Hello there! I need an honest feedback about my practice work for copywriting.

So I want to become a copywriter but the hardest part for me is the beginning so yeah, I'll get right to it and please help me by giving feedback/s. Thank you!

Product: Notebook

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So yeah, that's it. Tbh, it gave me a little bit of Ick but it's much better to start from here rather than nothing.

Again, would like to give advance gratitude for the feedbacks.

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u/Little-Form9374 — 6 days ago

There's something sa Lala chocolate ngayon

I remember vividly back then na lasang chocolate pa yung Lala. I'm not expecting nmn na maging rich and premium ng lasa pero ngayon na nakabili ako, napansin ko, maski yung subtle taste ng chocolate di ko malasahan, it's just....... sweet. Tinignan ko yung packaging para lang makita yung ingredients but walang nakalista. I dunno if ako lang nakapansin sa new taste ng Lala pero lmk kung kayo din napansin niyo.

u/Little-Form9374 — 13 days ago