


Is this interesting?
For context, this is chapter 6 of a novel I'm working on and I'm wondering if these first three pages sound intriguing. I'm also open to criticism. Thank you.



For context, this is chapter 6 of a novel I'm working on and I'm wondering if these first three pages sound intriguing. I'm also open to criticism. Thank you.
This is chapter 6 of a novel I'm working on and I'm wondering if these first three pages sound intriguing. If so, please tell what is intriguing about it so that I can apply what I did well to later chapters. Thank you.
Also, if anyone knows what other genre the story could fit into please tell me