u/Long_Appointment_810

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Is this interesting?

For context, this is chapter 6 of a novel I'm working on and I'm wondering if these first three pages sound intriguing. I'm also open to criticism. Thank you.

u/Long_Appointment_810 — 7 days ago
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I have a question. But please read this first.

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u/Long_Appointment_810 — 7 days ago