[In Progress] [20k] [Fantasy Romance] A Prophecy Etched in Opal
Hey there!
Thank you for taking time to read this post!
This is a co-wrote book that my long time friend and I have been writing.
Mirabella Silvercrest was eleven years old when Illumeran soldiers tore through her town and stole her people in the name of prophecy. Thirteen years later, she has built a quieter life within the capital of Illumera, Aurelith, as a gifted healer alongside her father.
Magic across Prismara is beginning to fail, and children are no longer “losing their grey,”. Their gifts of magic are fading before they fully awaken.
While researching a possible cure in secrecy for this mysterious affliction known as Greylock, Mirabella is summoned to the royal palace to treat the sickened king. What begins as a healer’s duty quickly entangles her in fractured prophecy, dangerous magic, and three men who begin to reveal the guarded life she has carefully built around herself.
Mirabella is caught between loyalty, desire, and the realization that the fate tying her and the three men together may be less conspiratorial than she thought.
Some wounds don't heal cleanly, and gods don't forgive what mortals have done.
The feedback were looking for is as follows.
- Character cohesion and story cohesion overall.
- Any blatant plotholes that we have missed.
- Overall quality.
We would be open to beta swaps! If this interests you please dm and let us know!
-T&C