u/LouiseCipher

Hello, everybody. I used to be pretty active in this sub, reviewing people's music and making playlists of the best i find from the sub. I took a pretty long hiatus after my dog passed away bc there was just so much else going on in life too. I wanted to reach back out and start community building w yall again if you give me a chance. Drop your original song, no remixes, I do not review ai slop.

I review a lot of people's music, I want a chance for people to review my chops too.

My days away from you

Are different shades of blue

In fact they're almost gray,

Like when you say the truth

Would you think me dim

If i chose to stay?

Would you let me in,

Despite the lack of rain?

I know, outside it seems kinda sunny

But deep down, I feel this pain in my tummy

Can't explain, feeling bummy

Like I dont know where my home is

It's like showbiz,

Traveling round w no kids

It's this, this sorta empty feeling

Inside a room that has 4 walls but yet no ceiling

Aww hell, I just can't quite explain it right

I'm like a painter tryna describe the different shades of white

Eggshell, beige, and there's ivory

Feeling frail, feeling plain, that's the irony

Round you, can't help to feel that I'm special

Like an artist offered up an instrumental

Or an athlete who had won a golden medal

Or like Lucy before cast down as the devil

That's to say that I know this feeling's fleeting

But can you blame me for tryna give it meaning?

Or tryna capture it in the lyrics that I'm singing?

A form of art that's known to exorcize the demons

Exercise; cause is good for your health

Don't keep it stuck inside, your killing yourself

Let it out,

Breathe it in

Clear the doubt

Feel the wind blow past

And the end come fast

So you better go and get it

Go and find out what you wanted

Just return before the credits start roll

Before the lights turn out

Before your body turns to soul

Is what I'm talking about

Just go

Let yourself, set your old self free

I'll let you be you, and I'll be me

Finally

We will be set free

Flying high in the sky

Til we roost in the trees

A couple bird just blowing thru the breeze

In the open air, no cage to be seen