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New book on Wattpad written by me

I think I've finally found the kind of story I want to write.

I've been outlining a contemporary romance called One Last Thing, and for the first time, I feel like I know exactly what I want my writing to feel like.

It's not a story built around a huge misunderstanding, cheating, toxic relationships, or dramatic breakups. It's about two people who simply... grow up.

The story follows two 17-year-olds, Niyati and Dev, who finish their board exams and decide to complete a bucket list of 25 things to do before graduation over their final two months together. Every chapter revolves around one item on that list.

Things like:

Getting lost without Google Maps.

Spending an entire day letting a coin make every decision.

Asking strangers what happiness means to them.

Watching every train pass without getting on one.

Spending a whole day without checking the time.

The list slowly becomes less about completing tasks and more about creating memories.

Then graduation comes.

Life happens.

No dramatic fight. No betrayal. No villain.

Just different cities, different careers, changing phone numbers, and adulthood.

Years later, they reunite, and one of the things they dig up is a time capsule they buried when they were seventeen. Inside are old letters, childhood keepsakes, and lists they wrote to their future selves. Some letters almost get exchanged. Some remain unread. Some finally get opened years later.

I want the story to feel like warm coffee on a rainy day, or finishing a comforting book and sitting quietly for a few minutes afterward because you're not ready to leave those characters behind.

Another decision I made is that the entire novel will be written in English, even though the characters are Indian. I love Hindi, but I write much more naturally in English, and I didn't want to force dialogue that didn't sound authentic to my own writing voice.

I'm also avoiding long physical descriptions. Readers won't immediately know exactly what the characters look like. Instead, their appearances will slowly reveal themselves throughout the story, just as their personalities do.

I'm still in the outlining stage, but the more I work on it, the more it feels less like a romance and more like a story about growing up, ordinary moments, friendships, and the people who quietly become home.

I'd genuinely love to know:

Would you read a slow-burn, slice-of-life romance where "life happened" is the reason for the separation—not because the characters stopped caring about each other, but because adulthood simply took them in different directions?

I'd also love any thoughts on the concept or things you'd personally enjoy seeing in a story like this..

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u/LoveLostLibrary — 1 day ago

The penthouse : war in life

I have finally finished all 3 seasons of The Penthouse and I genuinely don't know whether I should recommend this show to people or recommend therapy.

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What exactly did the writers put in this drama?

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I started Season 1 thinking it was going to be a story about wealthy families, academic pressure, and social status. Three seasons later I had witnessed enough crimes, betrayals, secret affairs, revenge plots, and near-death experiences to fill an entire criminal law textbook.

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Let's start with the children.

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The amount of attitude these kids had needs to be studied scientifically. Every single one of them walked around acting like they owned the country. The twins especially had me questioning my life choices. Seok-kyung would wake up every morning and immediately decide to ruin someone's day, and Seok-hoon spent half of Season 1 looking like he was silently buffering while chaos happened around him.

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And the parents?

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I have never seen a group of adults so committed to making the worst possible decisions. These people treated children's singing competitions and school rankings like they were fighting for the throne of an empire. Every conversation was either blackmail, manipulation, screaming, or plotting revenge.

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Joo Dan-tae deserves a special mention because every time I thought he couldn't possibly become a worse person, he somehow found a way. Watching him was like watching a supervillain who accidentally wandered into a school drama.

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And Seo-jin?

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My blood pressure rose every time she appeared on screen. Yet somehow she was also one of the most entertaining characters in the entire show. I hated her, I was impressed by her, I hated her again, and then somehow I felt sorry for her. The emotional whiplash this woman gave me should be illegal.

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What amazes me most is that The Penthouse somehow convinced me to care about characters I absolutely despised at the beginning. Some of the characters experienced genuine growth, while others somehow managed to become even more chaotic than before.

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The real achievement of this show is that it constantly escalates. Every time I thought, "Okay, surely this is the peak insanity," the writers responded by introducing an even more ridiculous twist. By Season 3 I had completely stopped trying to predict anything because the writers were operating on a level of chaos I could never hope to understand.

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And yet... I couldn't stop watching.

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No matter how angry I got, I always needed to know what happened next. Every episode ended with me saying, "Just one more episode," and suddenly it was 3 a.m.

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Is The Penthouse realistic? Absolutely not.

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Is it subtle? Not even a little.

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Did it stress me out? Constantly.

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Did it make me yell at my screen? Every episode.

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Would I watch all 3 seasons again?

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Unfortunately, yes.

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10/10. Worst people ever. Peak entertainment.

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u/LoveLostLibrary — 18 days ago