Sword/Shield Fighter Concept
Hello all, just looking for feedback on a fighter champion concept I’ve been thinking about. Below is a basic rundown of the name, basic lore, and move set. Let me know what y’all think.
Galen/Aelyth(depending on gender) -the Aegis of Demacia-lore (his/her) family had served the Lightshield lineage for generations as part of the crown guard. Jarvan the second had gifted (his/her) grandfather the Aegis of the Legion shield after his/her great grandfather fell in battle defending Jarvan the first against Sion and his horde. It is said that his/her great grandfather died with his sword stuck inside of Sion’s arm as his hand was locked around Jarvan the first’s throat and it has since become a generational heirloom and a stark representation of the family’s unwavering loyalty to the crown. Along with the Aegis of the legion (he/she) wields a steel petricite infused sword (an ore forged from special stone exclusively found within Demacia that contains anti magic properties)
P- sundering blows - hitting enemies with abilities applies stacks of sundering blows. After 3 stacks an enemy becomes vulnerable to (Galen/Aelyth’s) strikes for 8 seconds and will receive 10% additional damage from (him/her) additionally, Pierce Vital will always critically strike against vulnerable enemies.
Q- Advance/Overpower/Sweeping Strike -
Galen/Aelyth’s q has 3 parts. (Not a targeted ability)
Advance- leap forward and slash in front of you twice applying stacks of sundering blows with each strike you make contact with.
Overpower- reactivate Q to do a powerful single slash that shreds armor by 15% and slows briefly while applying a stack of sundering blows
Sweeping strike- activate q a third time to do a spinning sweep of your sword around you applying a stack of sundering blows to all enemies hit. If an enemy already vulnerable, this ability inflicts grievous wounds to all vulnerable enemies hit and causes them to bleed for an additional 50% damage caused by sweeping strike over 3 seconds.
W- Fortify/counter- W has two parts the reactivating w is conditional on the first part.
Fortify- Galen/Aelyth raise their shield for 1 second and become immune to CC preparing to block an incoming physical/magic attack/ability in the direction he/she is facing (does not block true damage) if the attack blocked is magic, 50% of the blocked damage will be absorbed into the sword and will empower the next “pierce vital” unleashing a piercing magic tip that extends out from the tip of the sword and does damage equal to Pierce Vital’s base amount plus the amount stored. Fortify can be ended early to cast counter as soon as an attack/ability is blocked.
Counter- if an attack is blocked you can reactivate w to inflict a counter blow dealing. (X) physical damage +10% max hp and healing for (50% +x% bonus ad) of the damage done to champs. If the attack is blocked within the first .25 seconds of activating Fortify, Counter will critically strike dealing (x) physical damage +15% max hp.
E-Pierce Vital - Galen/Aelyth thrust their sword forward in a line dealing additional damage based on the targets missing health. If the target is vulnerable due to receiving 3 stacks of sundering blows, this ability will critically strike and slow by 40% decaying over 2 seconds
R- Battle Cry-Galen/Aelyth let out a mighty shout and activate the seal on their Aegis inspiring themselves and nearby allies granting 15% movement speed along with 10%+(x(mr)) and 10%+(x(arm)) for 10 seconds additionally, Galen/Aelyth gain 10% omnivamp-takedowns extend the duration of battle cry for an additional 3 seconds (for Galen/Aelyth only)