Needing help with someone willing to take a chance on me and help me out
I’m currently writing my first ever Harry Potter fan fiction. I have 13 chapters written so far I’ve been working on this project for months and I keep reading what I write and I rewrite it now I need honest opinions on of it all is making sense and the flow is on point I’m looking for someone to be a editor for me but also be a beta reader for. I do want honest answers just take into consideration this is my first time writing something like this. My story is post war non can compliant everything takes place in our generation now. With tags that include Morello grey Hermione pure blood Hermione betrayal, mature fighting mature language and eventually gore and eventually smut it’s also gonna be a reverse harem where Hermione has 5 mates Harry is with Pansy Ginny is with Blaise Neville and Luna are together Ron is bad Hannah Abbott is bad