u/Mammoth-West-9974

GROUNDED

Feature

109 Pages

Drama, Historical Fiction

Logline: When every flight in America is grounded, four strangers share the last rental car out of Columbus and drive cross-country through the aftermath of September 11th, 2001, forcing each of them to confront what they've been running from long before that day.

Feedback concerns: I would love help figuring out if the middle is too repetitive in the shape of the scenes and character arcs, and how the ending lands. Lastly, I would love any advice about what to actually do with it when it's polished and completed. It's my first one and I'm clueless on that end. Any and all feedback is appreciated though...thanks in advance for reading!

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1F-2LhODQZT_nyMuE-YbAhEH0gQFV76FA/view?usp=sharing

Here is a short film I wrote, "Saturday" - I have a series of short films with the same family at the center of them. I would love any and all feedback on it!

Logline: What starts as an ordinary afternoon of wiffle ball turns into a father's reckoning with the son who isn't there.

Genre: Drama

Page Count: 13

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QyN1modg57aB1YVeARHshSFQTcQjnJKr/view?usp=sharing

Grounded

Final Draft PDF

109 pages

Drama, Road Movie, Historical Fiction

Logline: When every flight in America is grounded, four strangers share the last rental car out of Columbus and drive cross-country through the aftermath of September 11th, 2001, forcing each of them to confront what they've been running from long before that day.

Feedback Concerns: Any feedback would be extremely helpful. I'm less concerned about the commercial viability, and more concerned with a believable story with believable characters.