u/Michell-ShakeBerry

So Im writing this relationship for my serie and I wanted to have some advice or opinions on it because I aint sure if it is "good enough" if that (makes sense)
note : english aint my first langage so Im sorry if this written badly

SO in my story, there is a guy that is an artist(well he draws)...and a girl that is a photographer (they are both teens in the story like 15 years old)
They try to collab together and one of their common friends joke about them being together because they hang out a lot...and the guy starts to believe that he has feelings for the girl...But the girl doesnt really have feelings for him. When he tells her that he wants to be with her she accepts even tho she doesnt feel anything romantic towards him (she thinks that she SHOULD be with him because people get in relationships and she should too). But , as they continue to date...She still doesnt have feelings towards him and she feels about it because how can she not fall in love with a boy??
This couple is more of a one sided situation where no one is really happy...the guy doesnt feel like she is invested in this relationship and the girl doesnt understand what is she doing wrong , why cant she have feelings for him. When she tries to say that this isnt going anywhere the guy tells her that maybe if they tried harder it would be better...But even tho they try it never does and at some point they realize that and really break up.

So if anyone can give me a feedback / advices to make it better I would love to get it
thank you in advance

song name (potential spoiler for season 2 episode 7 )

editing my oc into a screenshot cause I can

metalocalypse oc

any websites to watch the show WITH SUBS???

i dont know how to write correctly this one sided relationship