u/Minimum-Cause-6424

I keep finding cards that I believe would go great in a B4 Lumra deck, but honestly dont know exactly what direction to go with it to make it work. I am looking to budget build this as much as possible. If I could get some suggestions for cuts, additions, and overall direction, that would be amazing as I am looking to buy the cards this weekend to officially build for the upcoming magic night.

I labeled what cards I own vs have to buy on archidekt.
https://archidekt.com/decks/22449729/lumra_draft

https://moxfield.com/decks/AByusmvTh0-u9X4PkQCbOw

I have been working on a Zurgo Stormrender commander deck that has been getting quite powerful but is still having trouble keeping up with some decks in my pod. I would like to push it a bit closer to a true entry cedh deck. The deck currently revolves around creating and sacrificing tokens, using aristocrats to kill opponents with etb and death triggers. I often sac tokens for draw, mana, and direct damage. Ive thought about adding cars like grave pact to limit my opponents board state but feel that a 4 drop may be a little too slow for my end goal. I will link the Archidekt and Moxfield deck list and post it as a comment. I do not post on reddit often so if there is an easier way for viewers to see the deck and offer advice, please let me know!

https://archidekt.com/decks/22707015/zurgo_20

https://moxfield.com/decks/cqnbCn48xUGuFm4zULG4xg

Thank you for the input! I know this commander will never be CEDH but I do want to make it as strong and as fast as I can to at least be able to confidently call it B4. Any advice would be greatly appreciated!!