Beta readers wanted — feedback appreciated!

mkbooks.replit.app
I’m looking for more feedback on my completed literary fantasy, Monere: To Remind the Heart. You can read chapter by chapter and leave feedback directly on the site.
I’m at 92 readers so far and would love more honest reactions—what works, what doesn’t, where you lose interest, or anything that stands out.
Thanks to anyone who takes a look!

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u/Minimum_Pension1513 — 2 days ago

Looking for people to read my book

I’m looking for more readers for Monere: To Remind the Heart.

https://mkbooks.replit.app

It’s literary fantasy/magical realism about Monere, the Guardian of Truth. She is drawn to people at moments when something buried in their heart can still matter.
I made a site where you can just start reading chapter by chapter and leave feedback as you go. Everything is private, so you won’t see anyone else’s opinions before giving your own.
There’s no commitment to finish the book. Read one chapter or read the whole thing. I just want your actual reaction while you’re reading. Tell me what you loved, what didn’t work, what confused you, what made you want to keep going—or what made you want to stop 😂
AI has been part of my writing/editing process, so I’m completely open to feedback about that too. If you notice it in the writing, tell me where.

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u/Minimum_Pension1513 — 5 days ago

Will you read my manuscript? Monere: To Remind The Heart

Hi! I recently finished my novel, Monere: To Remind the Heart. It’s a literary fantasy at about 50,000 words, and I’m looking for people willing to read and give genuine feedback.
I’m especially interested in your experience as a reader: what works, what doesn’t, where you get confused, what hits emotionally, and whether you actually want to keep reading. I’m not looking for paid editing services.
I built a simple reading site for it where the book is separated by chapter and you can leave feedback directly after each chapter. You don’t need to create an account or commit to finishing the entire book. Even feedback from someone who reads a few chapters and decides to stop would be useful to me.
Read it here: https://mkbooks.replit.app
Thanks to anyone who gives it a chance!

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u/Minimum_Pension1513 — 5 days ago

[Complete] [50,678 words] [Literary Fantasy] Looking for beta readers for MONERE: To Remind the Heart

Hello! I'm looking for readers to give genuine feedback on my completed literary fantasy novel, MONERE: To Remind the Heart.

It's 50,678 words and 20 chapters.

At this point, what I really want is feedback from actual readers about their experience with the story—what they enjoyed, what confused them, what hit emotionally, and whether they wanted to keep reading.

I made a simple reader site for the manuscript. You can read it chapter by chapter and leave feedback directly at the bottom of each chapter. There's no payment or commitment to finish the entire book.

Here is the link if you would like to give it a go! mkbooks.replit.app

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u/Minimum_Pension1513 — 6 days ago

[Complete] [50,678] [Literary Fantasy/Magical Realism] MONERE: To Remind the Heart

Hello! I'm looking for readers to give feedback for my book Monere: To Remind The Heart.

It is a completed manuscript of 50678 words. I am looking for genuine feedback for my literary fantasy. I have a simple site where you can read chapter by chapter and leave feedback per chapter. Anyone interested can DM me for the link.

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u/Minimum_Pension1513 — 6 days ago