Hi all! I would love some feedback on my hook.
"When an art museum curator is stripped of her life to become the first piece in a charming librarian's collection, she wages a psychological war against her attacker, gaslighting him to the brink of madness. But the deeper she sinks, the harder it becomes to tell curator from collector."
I'm an author and I have found myself in a major corner. Basically my MC installs malware onto the antagonist’s computer. Well, the antagonist becomes suspicious and gets rid of the computer and then sets up passwords on a new one. I really need her to have access to his computer. haha. The easiest way to solve this was to have the original malware also include keylogging software and she recorded passwords he used as part of that software.
But that just seems like such an easy and convenient solution. I want to make her work for it. but I don’t know how I could make her work for it. Google is absolutely no help. I can’t find any research on how she could access his computer after this otherwise haha.
Is there tools or software she could use for this? I know nothing about technology so I'm really out of my depth here and hating my character for doing this to me. haha.
I'm an author and I have found myself in a major corner. Basically my MC installs malware onto the antagonist’s computer. Well, the antagonist becomes suspicious and gets rid of the computer and then sets up passwords on a new one. I really need her to have access to his computer. haha. The easiest way to solve this was to have the original malware also include keylogging software and she recorded passwords he used as part of that software.
But that just seems like such an easy and convenient solution. I want to make her work for it. but I don’t know how I could make her work for it. Google is absolutely no help. I can’t find any research on how she could access his computer after this otherwise haha.
Is there tools or software she could use for this? I know nothing about technology so I'm really out of my depth here and hating my character for doing this to me. haha.
I hope this is okay to post here, but I need some help. So I'm an author and I have found myself in a major corner. Basically my MC installs malware onto the antagonist’s computer. Well, the antagonist becomes suspicious and gets rid of the computer and then sets up passwords on a new one. I really need her to have access to his computer. haha. The easiest way to solve this was to have the original malware also include keylogging software and she had recorded passwords he used as part of that software.
But that just seems like such an easy and convenient solution. I want to make her work for it. but I don’t know how I could make her work for it. Google is absolutely no help. I can’t find any research on how she could access his computer after this otherwise haha.
Is there tools or software she could use for this? I know nothing about technology so I'm really out of my depth here and hating my character for doing this to me. haha.
I've made some adjustments, so curious how it sounds now?
A museum curator who reads people like art, discovers she’s the first piece in a dangerous man’s “collection” and turns his own twisted tactics against him to make sure no one else is added.
Hi all! I would love some feedback on my hook. Is it clear? confusing? Does it sound like something someone would want to read?
"When she becomes the first piece in a dangerous man’s collection, an art curator turns his own tactics against him to ensure she is the last."