
Pre-ink test page for my manga. Honest opinions would be greatly appreciated
This hasn't been inked yet (I'm still finding a brush that I like the feel of) but I wanted to see what people thought of it even in this earlier stage.
Does the layout make sense? Is the setting eyecatching? Does it make you want to know more at all?
I know it isn't polished, but any feedback on those basics, and ideas on where I can improve would be super great to hear.
Thankyou for checking itnout regardless! :)