New Dark Fantasy Writer (Would appreciate some critique)
Hi guys, it's my first time here and writing, I'm a huge dark science fantasy fan, inspired by the likes of FromSoftware games, H.P Lovecraft writings, Warhammer, and 'The Vagrant'. I've been world-building, creating the cosmology and planning on a master document whilst drafting concept sketches for a few weeks now, and would really appreciate some constructive critique and advice. The image attached is the backstory of the first race I've created, would love some advice on what to improve, so far I've written around 20.000 words, including 12 races, 6 human factions, approximately 20 Gods, and a whole lot more lore, magic, conflicts, and a bunch other cool stuff. Let me know if I should post more. Thanks everyone.
u/Narrow-Nail7882 — 3 days ago