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UP Research Criticizing Jonaxx

UP Research Criticizing Jonaxx

I saw this UP student's research about Jonaxx's works. I am one of her readers, but upon reading this, it became an eye-opener.

Sexual Abuse

Scorching Love (2016)

Snow refuses his advances by pleading "Get off, Engineer Riego. Please... Go away...", but Sibal outright rejects it.

Waves of Memories (2016)

Tinikom ko ang bibig ko para pigilan siya ngunit imbes na umatras ay lumapat ang labi niya sa akin.

"What the hell are you doing?" tanong ko at tinulak ang kanyang dibdib.

Tila bakal iyon na ayaw paawat. He nipped and sucked my lips making me feel so dizzy.

"Stop it, Ali!" utos ko.

In another instance, Ali once again forces Aia to have a sexual interaction with him. Aia has not yet recovered her memories, so she is uncomfortable in getting intimate with him:

Tinulak ko siya pero halos mawalan ako ng lakas nang maramdaman ang paulit ulit niyang halik. He sucked my lip and he licked it with so much passion.

"Ali!" sigaw ko at tinulak siyang muli.

Hinawakan niya ang kamay ko at nang tinulak niya ako ay bumagsak ako sa kama. I felt his other hand trying to remove the towel habang dahan dahan niya akong hinihiga. I groaned in protest but it's only drowned by his kisses.

Island of Fire (2017)

Rad continues to touch Zari even after she tells him to stop which is a direct violation of bodily autonomy:

"Rad, stop," I half-heartedly commanded. Huling protesta para sa katawang tuluyan nang nadarang ng apoy.

Even a "half-hearted" protest indicates a lack of full, enthusiastic consent. Her initial "stop" should be enough. His disregard for her verbalized boundary is a form of sexual assault.

What Lies Beneath the Sand (2017)

"What are you doing..." I half heartedly struggled.

He inserted his hand on my chest, gaya ng ilang beses niya nang ginawa.

Hinawakan ko agad ang palapulsuhan niya para alisin iyon doon dahil alam ko kung anong mararamdaman niya roon.

"Why is your heart beating so fast then? Hindi ba ayaw mo sa akin?" he said softly.

My peak hardened at his touch. I want to stop him pero walang boses ang lumabas sa aking labi.

Tripped: Lilienne (2016)

Riguel dismisses Lilienne's resistance to his kisses. Lilienne does not want the kisses because she still has a lot to say (Chapter 35).

Lilienne's explicit physical struggle and her internal reasoning clearly indicate her lack of desire for the kiss at that moment. However, Riguel's action of holding her arms to prevent her from moving demonstrates a disregard for her expressed wishes.

Unprotected Ejaculation Without Consent

Island of Fire (2017)

This is how Rad reacts when he has been told that Zari is getting a shot regularly, indicating that he wants to
impregnate her:

"What if you get pregnant?" tanong niya na parang iyon ang sagot sa lahat ng problema ko.

Ngumiwi ako sabay tingin sa kanya. "I won't get pregnant. I get a shot regularly."

He muttered a curse and then went back to his position. Hindi siya nagsalita.

Tripped: Lilienne (2016)

Lilienne's explicit desire to avoid the worry of
conceiving clearly demonstrates her lack of consent to this potential outcome.

The added element of Riguel allegedly hiding Lilienne's birth control pills introduces an even more serious dimension to this issue, potentially escalating the
disregard for her reproductive rights to the level of reproductive coercion.

Sexual Engagement With a Minor

Waves of Memories (2016)

Aia is only 15 years old when she is kissed by the 21-year-old Ali.

Island of Fire (2017)

22-year-old Rad kisses the 15-year-old Zari.

In the same story, Rad goes beyond the kisses and she touches the minor Zari sexually when she reaches 17.

Tripped: Lilienne (2016)

Riguel engages in sexual intercourse with
Lilienne when he is already 18 years old and she is just 16 years old.

These concerns often center on the portrayal of dominant, controlling male characters and their relationships with submissive female protagonists, which can perpetuate harmful stereotypes and influence readers' perceptions of healthy relationships.

u/New_Recording5925 — 5 days ago

pens_fries is back

ibabalik na raw ni pens_fries ang stories niya. she said one time lang talaga niya ginamit ang ai. pinaringgan din ang other authors na nang-down sa kaniya para iangat ang sarili nila.

u/New_Recording5925 — 12 days ago

starjeizing's publishing house

3 publishing houses offered to publish Starjeizing's BL stories. My hunch is LIB, Pop Fiction, and Psicom.

She'll most likely choose LIB kasi sila nakakahakot ng sikar na authors ngayon.

u/New_Recording5925 — 13 days ago

What happened to VentreCanard?

I remembered pre-pandemic and isa talaga siya sa mainstream authors. Halos lahat ng Wattpad pages noon is posting about her.

But now, parang lowkey na lang siya. I know na may new books siya under Pop Fiction, but I noticed the decline of engagements.

Is it because of the Caught in His Arms adaption na flop?

I think she's writing under Wattpad Originals na lang din kasi.

What do you think?

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u/New_Recording5925 — 13 days ago

authors with fast updates

Sino pa 'yung kilala niyong authors aside from Jonaxx na active at mabilis mag-update?

Si Jonaxx kasi, almost everyday at minsan triple update pa. I'm curious kung may iba pa bang writer na kaya rin ang ganitong pace.

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u/New_Recording5925 — 13 days ago

Is it okay to use AI for grammar editing?

I saw this statement from Sulatniserene. So acceptable naman pala sa readers ngayon na magpa-polish ng grammar kay ChatGPT? Which is same lang sa ginawa ni Reintold...

Ayun lang si Reintold hindi pa prinoofread, nahuli tuloy.

u/New_Recording5925 — 15 days ago

sulatniserene using ChatGPT

correct me if i'm wrong, but isn't this tab ChatGPT? hahahaha

for context: this is the dump tiktok account of sulatniserene. reposted din yung 2nd pic sa main acc niya. kung sino pa talaga loud about sa AI, siya pa yung gumagamit. i mean, sa mga authors na gumagamit niyan, manahimik na lang kayo. pagiging hypocrite na 'yan if you don't practice what you preach.

u/New_Recording5925 — 15 days ago

pen_fries using ai

What are your thoughts about this? She said she only used a tool to correct and polish her grammar, but yung nasama na prompt sa update niya is "Here is the polished and extended scene in Byron's POV, seamlessly blending your dialogue with the scolding lesson that follows"

If you wanted to just correct your grammar, Grammarly is free at walang masasamang prompt diyan. You clearly used ChatGPT to generate your chapter. Yes, you can say that the ideas are yours, but would you call yourself a writer if ai is writing for you?

I saw a similar tiktok post regarding Scriiven, but na-take down na siya and wala akong screenshot. Nasama rin ang prompt sa update niya.

Parang mga self-proclaimed artist lang 'yan na nagpa-generate ng idea nila sa AI tapos claiming na artist sila because sila naman yung gumawa ng prompt.

If gusto niyo talaga maging writer, mag-aral kayo ng grammar. Or write, even imperfectly. Mas okay pa nga yung may grammatical errors but improving kaysa sa malinis nga na sulat gawa naman ng AI.

And this is not being toxic as a reader. I view literature as art, and for me, AI is not art. Kung hindi niyo kayang magsulat, wag niyo na pasukin ang pagiging writer. Mag-influencer kayo kung clout ang gusto niyo.

u/New_Recording5925 — 16 days ago

Moochica Issue

Shinare ni theboybehindanxiety yung post ni Bradley Loserr about moochica. Iisang friendgroup sila theboybehindanxiety, kynexis, spaniarain, and filocalist. Tapos ito namang si moochica is in the same circle with mouse-io, coffellies, and allynieva. May insider chika ba kayo about sa mga BL author na 'to?

u/New_Recording5925 — 21 days ago

nepo writer

for anyone who knows sarangmii, i noticed that she relies on commissioning artists and paid promotions para lang may magbasa ng story niya.

i'm not saying that it's bad, pero inuubos na ata niya pera niya para lang sumikat. and yet, unknown at ignored pa rin sa wattpad community.

ako yung na-sad for her.

sumikat yung sci-fi story niya pre-pandemic tapos nawala siya, and ngayong bumalik wala na siyang readers. kaya sumisipsip siya ngayon sa mga kilalang writers and artists, tapos sinasabayan naman siya ng mga ito dahil maraming pera.

nagsusulat na rin siya ng BL kasi yun yung sikat... sobrang turn-off talaga ng ganito knowing na hindi naman siya part ng community tapos puro straight stories niya before.

kaya lang naman maraming pera si maem pang-commission kasi ka-fubu nung mga rich guys dun sa UP. alam 'to ng mga nakakakilala sa kaniya. literal na ginamit mukha para sa pera tapos ginagamit din ngayon para manghakot ng readers

i used to like her prepandemic, pero parang ang goal na lang niya ngayon ay fame. nag-decline din writing skills niya. sad lang.

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u/New_Recording5925 — 1 month ago