u/No-Chemical7091

hello all you lovely people!! i am almost finished writing a very short novella and was wondering if i could get some brutally honest feedback. my friends and family, though i love them dearly, are going easy on me and i really want honest feedback. please feel free to read and comment/dm any feedback

also it’s centered around the epicurean paradox in a way

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11lE8bxna9tvf6AIQmbiUhf0Roh3REgIn/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=115950486576603786749&rtpof=true&sd=true