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All feedback is welcome but I am interested in prose, pacing, characterisation and worldbuilding. Of course, does it keep you immersed and do you want to read more?





All feedback is welcome but I am interested in prose, pacing, characterisation and worldbuilding. Of course, does it keep you immersed and do you want to read more?
Does anyone possibly write books professionally, how difficult is it and how can you progress? Maybe someone can give some advice?
I’m a minor and I don’t want my family to know I’m writing a book but on the other hand I want credit for my work.i really don’t want them to know especially because my book is dark and pretty messed up. what should I do?
Okay, so, I just want some feedback rq. Not dropping the actual name and it's not vulgar or anything but I have accidently made the first part of it a cultural name from a culture I am not a part of. This was kind of shocking to me because when I made the second half I made sure it completely fabricated but I guess I just- forgot to look up the first half since I made it ages after? Anyways, I came up with this name by messing with the letters of a different word but as mentioned, it ended up being a very real cultural name. I've become quite attached to it though. And although I haven't started any publishing process yet (so I can change it easily) it is already the name on a LOT of my accounts as I put it together it years ago. In short, I want public opinion on if I should change it or not, even though I think I know the answer...
Edit: thanks, everyone! Still not dropping the name to my own detriment lol, but I think I’m just going to go the safe route anyways and change it to something that rings in a similar way but isn’t cultural
What started as a tribute to a friend who lost their battle to depression led to me being encouraged to publish the story.
The Sunshine Kid has a sun atop his head and wherever he goes he spreads joy and laughter. But sometimes the sun turns into a storm. The Sunshine Kid hides his storm away not wanting others to see. Eventually he learns that he can lean on friends even on the cloudiest day.
Check it out!
Link to hardcover https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-sunshine-kid-kelly-schwan/1151086044?ean=9798234113566
Link to paperback https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B0HFF2VHXY/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0
What do you think about using it for that purpose?
I’m supposed to be good at this. I spent 30 years advertising the world’s biggest brands. I started and sold a digital media company. And yet...marketing my new, self published, illustrated noir crime series, Smalltime Comics, his been a b*tch.
Here’s a list of things I did that failed, followed by three things I got right. Hopefully, it gives you some perspective and saves you a little agony.
**Failure #1**. I created a series of low budget promotional videos for social media. [One of them](https://www.instagram.com/p/DPxFWmQjA0S/) did okay for about five minutes on IG; the others tanked. Hard.
**Failure #2**. TikTok. I learned the hard way that TT rewards you for being addicted to it, posting night and day, and pretending to love other people’s inane ramblings. Not for me, thank you.
**Failure #3**. I ran a digital ad campaign on Pinterest. There’s a huge audience there, it’s off the beaten path for publishing, and they offered a dedicated rep to monitor and optimize the campaign. I spent many hours creating 20 unique pieces of content for this effort. Short version: It delivered tons of stats and graphs, one sale.
**Failure #4**
. PR campaign. Influencers, I learned, will only talk about you if you pay them, and what’s the value of that? So, I reached out (in a really creative way) to over 100 traditional media outlets. I delayed the launch of my book for five months because reviewers won’t touch it after it’s out, and you have to give them time to read it. Four major media outlets asked me to send them the book. None of them covered it.
**Failure #5**
. I posted my book on Goodreads and paid them to run a giveaway. Over 3,500 wanted to read my book! Right. Over 3,500 people clicked a button to win a giveaway of my book. Not the same thing. This little exercise cost me $600 for the giveaway, plus printing and shipping 25 books. Result: several reviews on Goodreads. (Ping me if you want to know more about the Goodreads experience).
**Failure #6**. I ran a giveaway/promo on Crimereads. A smaller, more focused audience. Nicer people, slightly better result than Goodreads, but not worth it.
Discouraging, right? Well, it’s not supposed to be easy, as they say. So, here, as promised, are three things I’ve done that actually helped.
**Not Failure #1**. I DM’d my IG followers one-by-one, personally, and asked each one if they’d like to be a reviewer. I got a great result. People were kind and enthusiastic, and I’ve received 62 reviews thus far, plus 38 on Goodreads.
**Not Failure #2**. I gave a bunch of ARC copies out to people I barely know: My barber, the guy behind the counter at the taco place, the ladies at the post office, etc. Again: kindness and enthusiasm, and several unsolicited social media posts.
**Not Failure #3**. This is the big one: I’m still working hard. I’m using the pain of my earlier failures to fuel new and different ideas. There’s no easy way to do this, so I’m going to do a bunch of things I really did not want to do. Starting this month, I’m meeting people in person, running live events, attending conferences, and doing a bunch of new ad posts on and offline. Assuming anybody’s interested, I’ll let you know the results.
i am working on my first real book it’s gonna be a dark kinda legal drama. i need to know if this is a good idea. so it’s about this guy he and his wife have been married 15 years she had a one year-old before they got married now They are getting a divorce. he never legally adopted the daughter and now they are getting divorce. legally speaking there is no way for him to get custody without the mom giving it to him. the mom is a career oriented who Loves her daughter but puts her job above all else and would never give custody to the husband. so he has to go outside the law.
hello everyone! i’m currently finishing up my adult dark academia romance, Desire, Unbidden, and i’m looking for a few beta readers 🤍
the story follows a young woman starting over after the sudden loss of her mother at an old university in ireland, drawn there partly by the life her mother once had in the country. she falls in with an eclectic group of friends, gets pulled into secret literary gatherings, and earns a place in a prestigious academic competition that places her under the mentorship of a professor she immediately finds herself at odds with – and cannot seem to stay away from.
it’s a slow-burn, character-driven story about academic rivalry, friendship, grief, ambition, morally complicated characters, and plenty of tension.
i’m mainly looking for feedback on pacing, character dynamics, whether the romance develops naturally, and general reader reactions – what kept you invested, where you lost interest, and what you became particularly attached to – before i eventually send the manuscript to a professional editor.
no previous beta-reading experience necessary! i’m mostly looking for people who genuinely enjoy this kind of story and are comfortable being honest about what works and what doesn’t.
the manuscript is currently around 80k words and still in progress. i’m happy to send it in batches as i finish or wait until the full manuscript is ready.
if this sounds like your kind of book, feel free to comment or message me 🕯️📚🤍
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As the universe approaches its cold and bitter end, humanity survives by hiding inside a constructed simulation. But inside, something is wrong. A plague of memory loss known as "The Forgetting" haunts humanity, and everyone has forgotten the doom they were escaping.
Mara Ward has spent years searching the dystopian landscapes of Egypt for answers to questions she can no longer remember asking. When fragments of cold reality begin to surface, she and her researcher Elin uncover a truth that could free humanity, or erase it entirely.
What if we wanted to forget...
The Memory of Stars is a character-driven action science fiction book. As the mystery unfolds, so too does the horror. The story contains themes of consciousness, identity, found family, and much more.
Violence (No gore), Gun violence, death, depictions of memory loss and cognitive decline. Slavery and forced labour. Imprisonment and torture (references and briefly depicted). Body horror transformation. One non-explicit consensual sex scene between two adults. Grief and bereavement. Implied references
December 1st 2026 - 83k words - Standalone book, no series
September 1st, 2nd, 3rd
November 28th 2026
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Since I was a child, I wanted to be a writer. I wrote stories, I wrote (terrible) poems, I wrote journals, and I dreamt of one day publishing a story. In August of 2025, I lost my dog, Bear. He was the best boy. I was an emotional wreck and didn’t think I would ever be happy again.
In November of ‘25, I decided to challenge myself by participating in Novel Writing Month. Where you write a novel in the month of November. I put aside the rules and expectations I set up for myself and wrote a story that I would want to read. I had one rule: 2,000 words a day. No matter what. I did it; every day I wrote 2,000 words. Some days it was 2,000 on the nose. Some days it was 3-4,000 words. Some days I was up till 4 am. Some days I didn't want to write, but I did it anyway.
I wrote Midnight City in 26 days.
I learned a lot about myself and about writing. It was the single most exhilarating experience of my life. I was living the dream. Then, I let it sit for six months. In those six months, I wrote the sequel. It was incredible. I decided that I would self-publish and try to find representation. I want to be a world-famous author, but you've got to be realistic about these things. The chances are slim to none. I just want people to read it now.
I then went into editing Midnight City.
DO. NOT. EDIT. YOUR. OWN. WORK.
I edited this fucking book six times. Our brains fill in the errors, the missing words, and the grammar rules we thought we knew. I missed so much. I finally caved and hired and editior. I had missed even more! I borrowed money to buy my own ISBNs. I tried to get an artist friend to make the book cover. HIRE A BOOK COVER ARTIST. I got the cover to where I wanted it. I formatted it to hell and back. I decided to publish through KDP for ebook and paperback. I'm working on IngramSpark, but that's its own nightmare.
Now, eight months after finishing my first draft. Midnight City is live and available on Kindle and Kindle Unlimited.
It has been the hardest I have ever worked. But, Goddamn, I have loved every minute of it.
Follow your dreams. Write every day, even if you dont want to. Hire an editor.
A special thank you to this subreddit and r/selfpublish. Your posts, comments, thoughts, wins, losses, questions, answers, and all of it in between have helped me more than you know. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
edit to add of course I fucked up the title. FML haha.
The dream has become a reality!!
I’m mostly talking to the handful of writers on this website who actually understand genre and wield some knowledge of the publishing industry. I also welcome ignorant-but-well-meaning guesses—but please tell me if you’re guessing.
I don’t have a good working title. I’m just calling it Dog Seeks Girl for now.
Here is my Achilles heel: I rarely write in the genre I read most. My ideas take me elsewhere, and I write stories that blend genres. If I have a story, I tell it. Then, I have trouble pinpointing the genre in which I’m working.
That can be a problem, because genres are promises to the reader. I need to know what promise I'm making.
I believe I may be writing historical speculative noir from a dog's perspective.
The protagonist is a real historical dog: Bummer, a Newfoundland who became famous in San Francisco history. Lazarus, his sidekick, is also a real dog from that time.
The novel is written with the dry, satirical voice of a David Attenborough nature documentary, dissecting 1860s human absurdities with clinical distance, while occasionally zooming deep into the visceral, sensory mind of a street dog.
The dogs don't think in words or human concepts, so this is not Watership Down or The Plague Dogs. They are not talking animals. We experience Bummer's senses, emotions, instincts, memories, and understanding of the world, but he does not suddenly acquire a human intellectual framework.
The story opens in 1861 and follows Bummer's five-year quest until his publicly recorded death in 1865. Personally, I prefer stories that take place over hours, days, and weeks, so the four-year span is unusual for me—but this story requires it.
Here is the logline I'm working under:
Bummer, the most loyal dog in California history, canvases the dark underbelly of 1860s San Francisco—from buried-ship saloons to high-society cults—herding the city’s most famous residents into saving his long-lost girl and the city itself from a mass ritual sacrifice to Moloch.
Bummer was raised by a little girl from the age of three weeks to three years. He was an extraordinarily ugly Newfoundland puppy who was nearly subjected to a “mercy drowning.” The little girl saved him, and the two became deeply bonded.
When they arrive in San Francisco, humans separate the girl and her family from Bummer, leaving him astray.
Bummer's central mystery is simple from his perspective:
Where did his girl go?
He spends years investigating.
The reader gets to see the clues and gradually work out what happened to her. Bummer doesn't understand the human conspiracy in the way the reader does. He follows scents, memories, instincts, and the people and animals who lead him toward her.
The investigation takes him into the world of cats, rats, and colorful human characters. Along the way, Bummer repeatedly manages to involve humans in what he has discovered, sometimes by manipulating them and sometimes simply by leading them where they need to go.
Among the historical figures he encounters are Mark Twain and Emperor Norton. Bummer essentially tricks or forces these humans into noticing pieces of a plot that exists beneath the streets of San Francisco.
The novel involves Bummer protecting his girl, but also protecting San Francisco itself. The mystery eventually reveals that the threat is much larger than what happened to one little girl.
I am using real people, real dogs, real places, and real documented events from San Francisco history—mostly.
I’m reasonably good about taking only a few liberties, but there are liberties taken when necessary to serve the story. I am willing to bend the historical rules.
For example, I use the Bohemian Club as inspiration for a group of cultists, although the actual organization didn't yet exist during my 1861–1865 timeframe. In the novel, I call the organization the Secret Circle.
So, I’m not claiming this is strict historical fiction.
I do think this is a mystery in an important sense.
The reader gets information that Bummer cannot interpret as a human would. We can see the clues and potentially solve what happened to his girl before Bummer understands the significance of what he has discovered.
The structure is therefore somewhat like Chinatown—a long investigation into a hidden conspiracy—but with rats, cats, famous people, satire, and a very different kind of detective.
Bummer is the investigator. He isn't a human detective with a dog's sidekick. (Well, Lazarus is a dog.)
The manuscript is complete at about 90,000 words.
My current description is:
A historical speculative noir featuring the deadpan, anthropological perspective of The Gods Must Be Crazy and the emotional drive of Watership Down**.**
But I don't know whether that's actually a useful genre description.
So, my question is:
What genre would you call this if you were trying to shelve or market it?
Is it historical fiction? Historical mystery? Historical noir? Speculative historical fiction? Something else?
Does the speculative element make “historical fiction” the wrong label, or is “historical speculative” a useful distinction?
And if it is a mystery, does that need to be part of the genre description?
Most importantly, what existing books would you tell me to read or study so I can understand the reader expectations I'm making?
(I know. I ask tough questions.)
I need to study the genre carefully enough to make sure I’m not promising the reader an experience the novel doesn't actually deliver.
Please tell me what you think I'm writing—even if your answer is “you've created a genre soup and need to pick a shelf.”
Thank you!
I've already published the first chapter on my patreon ( in my profile )for FREEE. I'm thinking about making at least a few of my works for free. I really need y'all support since this hobby takes a lot of time and effort, and is not appreciated enough these days. I will be writing other genres in the future and will make my readers fall in love with it. I hope my work gets recognised one day and I get to sign my readers books lol.
Sooo Happy and wanted to share🥰
I finished the first draft of my very first novel this weekend. I put all the chapters together and gave it a shiny title page and table of contents. My thought baby was finally finished, even if unpolished. Hooray!
I didn’t expect the sadness after. For the last six months I’ve been working tirelessly on this project, having not missed a single day of at least 300 words. Now that routine, the ritual of returning to the same world/people every day is over — or at least changed. After spending my Sunday putting around when I would normally be hard at work drafting this week’s outline, I realized the source of the feeling and burst into tears.
Happy tears, but also sad ones. I didn’t expect this reaction. Did anyone else feel the same after finishing their first novel?
Hey all! This is a short sci-fi novella and my very first publication, so I'm really excited but also slightly nervous, but I'm pretty proud of it! Little Nightmares/Miyazaki vibes!
Blurb:
Automation has its place in the world. The eerie thing about it is that it doesn't stop, even when we do.
He has been here for sixty three years. He knows the ship the way you know a room you have never left. The pressure gauge in the aft chamber. The clock that needs winding at noon. The table that needs setting at eight, for people who no longer come.
When his duties fall quiet for the first time, he descends into the ship below his deck — and discovers a world he never knew existed.
He has never thought to wonder why.
He wasn't programmed to.
Room after room. Machine after machine. Each one doing their job in perfect silence. Each one completely alone.
A novella about what lives at the bottom of things. And what happens when, after sixty three years, something finally looks up.
Hey guys, posting my new cover art for my fantasy book here. I'm a new author and I feel part and parcel of what makes self publishing most fun is all the other bits that come with it. I felt my original cover was a bit boring so decided to switch it up!
I know it's not on the level of professional designers, or some of the AI stuff people have started churning out, but it's something I made and I thought it was cool.
I was going for the 1970's folk horror vibe, as I've recently been going back over the old cult classics like Captain Kronos and The Wicker Man.
All the art is all hand drawn and painted. I purposefully went for the old collage poster style from cinema posters.
Anyway, I think it looks cool and I hope you do too :)
Hi!! I'm new to the publishing world. Always been a writer, but to me, you gotta be published to call yourself an author! (I dunno if anyone else has this distinction in their mind!) Well, my memoir is coming out in Sept and I am getting nervous.
I just had a random instagram biz celebrity with a big following tell me, essentially, "You're 40 years old and not even famous....you have no business writing a memoir." Feeling a little deflated and also gassed up!!!
It's called "Aneela, Where Are Your Eyebrows?" and shares my story of growing up with compulsive hair pulling disorder (trichotillomania) and my recovery, starting a business to help others and my journey with cancer.
I know I wrote it to help others feel seen and yet, the fear of being seen myself!!!
Anyone else get nervous like this? Of "What will people think?" once the book is out!?