WHICH GENRE AM I OPERATING IN?
I’m mostly talking to the handful of writers on this website who actually understand genre and wield some knowledge of the publishing industry. I also welcome ignorant-but-well-meaning guesses—but please tell me if you’re guessing.
I don’t have a good working title. I’m just calling it Dog Seeks Girl for now.
Here is my Achilles heel: I rarely write in the genre I read most. My ideas take me elsewhere, and I write stories that blend genres. If I have a story, I tell it. Then, I have trouble pinpointing the genre in which I’m working.
That can be a problem, because genres are promises to the reader. I need to know what promise I'm making.
The BOOK
I believe I may be writing historical speculative noir from a dog's perspective.
The protagonist is a real historical dog: Bummer, a Newfoundland who became famous in San Francisco history. Lazarus, his sidekick, is also a real dog from that time.
The novel is written with the dry, satirical voice of a David Attenborough nature documentary, dissecting 1860s human absurdities with clinical distance, while occasionally zooming deep into the visceral, sensory mind of a street dog.
The dogs don't think in words or human concepts, so this is not Watership Down or The Plague Dogs. They are not talking animals. We experience Bummer's senses, emotions, instincts, memories, and understanding of the world, but he does not suddenly acquire a human intellectual framework.
The story opens in 1861 and follows Bummer's five-year quest until his publicly recorded death in 1865. Personally, I prefer stories that take place over hours, days, and weeks, so the four-year span is unusual for me—but this story requires it.
Here is the logline I'm working under:
Bummer, the most loyal dog in California history, canvases the dark underbelly of 1860s San Francisco—from buried-ship saloons to high-society cults—herding the city’s most famous residents into saving his long-lost girl and the city itself from a mass ritual sacrifice to Moloch.
THE STORY
Bummer was raised by a little girl from the age of three weeks to three years. He was an extraordinarily ugly Newfoundland puppy who was nearly subjected to a “mercy drowning.” The little girl saved him, and the two became deeply bonded.
When they arrive in San Francisco, humans separate the girl and her family from Bummer, leaving him astray.
Bummer's central mystery is simple from his perspective:
Where did his girl go?
He spends years investigating.
The reader gets to see the clues and gradually work out what happened to her. Bummer doesn't understand the human conspiracy in the way the reader does. He follows scents, memories, instincts, and the people and animals who lead him toward her.
The investigation takes him into the world of cats, rats, and colorful human characters. Along the way, Bummer repeatedly manages to involve humans in what he has discovered, sometimes by manipulating them and sometimes simply by leading them where they need to go.
Among the historical figures he encounters are Mark Twain and Emperor Norton. Bummer essentially tricks or forces these humans into noticing pieces of a plot that exists beneath the streets of San Francisco.
The novel involves Bummer protecting his girl, but also protecting San Francisco itself. The mystery eventually reveals that the threat is much larger than what happened to one little girl.
HISTORY
I am using real people, real dogs, real places, and real documented events from San Francisco history—mostly.
I’m reasonably good about taking only a few liberties, but there are liberties taken when necessary to serve the story. I am willing to bend the historical rules.
For example, I use the Bohemian Club as inspiration for a group of cultists, although the actual organization didn't yet exist during my 1861–1865 timeframe. In the novel, I call the organization the Secret Circle.
So, I’m not claiming this is strict historical fiction.
MYSTERY
I do think this is a mystery in an important sense.
The reader gets information that Bummer cannot interpret as a human would. We can see the clues and potentially solve what happened to his girl before Bummer understands the significance of what he has discovered.
The structure is therefore somewhat like Chinatown—a long investigation into a hidden conspiracy—but with rats, cats, famous people, satire, and a very different kind of detective.
Bummer is the investigator. He isn't a human detective with a dog's sidekick. (Well, Lazarus is a dog.)
I'M STUCK
The manuscript is complete at about 90,000 words.
My current description is:
A historical speculative noir featuring the deadpan, anthropological perspective of The Gods Must Be Crazy and the emotional drive of Watership Down**.**
But I don't know whether that's actually a useful genre description.
So, my question is:
What genre would you call this if you were trying to shelve or market it?
Is it historical fiction? Historical mystery? Historical noir? Speculative historical fiction? Something else?
Does the speculative element make “historical fiction” the wrong label, or is “historical speculative” a useful distinction?
And if it is a mystery, does that need to be part of the genre description?
Most importantly, what existing books would you tell me to read or study so I can understand the reader expectations I'm making?
(I know. I ask tough questions.)
I need to study the genre carefully enough to make sure I’m not promising the reader an experience the novel doesn't actually deliver.
Please tell me what you think I'm writing—even if your answer is “you've created a genre soup and need to pick a shelf.”
Thank you!