u/Old-Indication-7612

“ Daniel Williams was born September 10, 1890 to a family of fashion models and make up enthusiasts known for taking in a poor stricken child off the streets.
That child as you could’ve guessed was Daniel, who was born out of an affair, and his family used the facade of adopting a poor child off the streets to save face and to keep him from telling anyone about it. He wasn’t being taken from rags to riches, more so just rags with better looking names: he ate and slept alone from the family. The few interaction he had during his child years were unpleasant and riddled with being forced as some mannequin to play dress up with.
One day, on August 31, 1905, ten days before Daniel turned sixteen, he was taken to a bright surgical room as doctors told the parents of some new surgery to make oneself younger. Of course they wouldn’t test it on themselves for risk of permanent damage, but Daniel was the perfect test subject. However, he fought and tugged himself away from the doors with straps needed to tie him down to the table before being sedated.
The surgery was not a success, Daniel had sprung awake during the operation. Ripping himself from his confinements and stabbing the medical staff with a scalpel that was previously lodged in his right eye. Surprisingly no one had died, but Daniel disappeared with no way of tracking him down.
For ten years Daniel Williams was never found till a particularly violent detective showed up on January 9, 1915. This new detective went by the same name, and even had an injury on his right side of his face.

For around five years this man had worked alone due to his high strung and unorthodox methods of getting the job done. That was until a kid name Jonah walked into his office.”

Slide 1 is the redesign/Slide 2 is the original

Notes: Had to dial down a lot about Daniel’s design to make him easier to draw. As for Drum eye, its ability is generally the same but design had to change to make it an artificial humanoid. I say this is a redesign, but this is more like full change to their designs.

Stand Name: Drum Eye

Close range Artificial Humanoid

Description: Drum Eye manifested after Daniel met Jonah and pricking his hand on a pearl embedded brooch Jonah had possessed. After which Daniel became noticeably weaker the next day, till someone tried to shot him while on a case.

Drum Eye is capable of creating bubbles from its head or hands in any space not being occupied. These bubbles, when they pop from any outside force, will violently pull anything around it to a central point (the bubble). However, these bubbles do descale in power the longer they are manifested and the damage depends on how far something is.

This does apply to Daniel as well, unless he is directly behind his stand, which has a range of about 2 meters.

Ex. A bullet pops a bubble. This will cause the bullet to be pulled into the center of the bubble with the converging air around it crushing the bullet. The person who fired, if far enough, would have been pulled towards the central point, but not near the center to be crushed.

The bubbles are simply a sealed off space devoid of anything and when they pop everything rushes in to fill that space, even air.

Stats:

Destructive Power: A
Speed: B
Durability: B
Range: C
Precision: D
Potential: A - (Daniel doesn’t fully utilize his stand ability that much)

Credits to u/BudgetKey6634 for the letting me use the original idea for the character.

Hope y’all like the redesign, and story bit, and any questions you have I’ll probably be able to answer.
Have a great day, night, or other👋

Credits to u/BudgetKey6634 for the both the character and stand!

User: Daniel Wellington

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Height: 6’4”

Info: Among all the fashion models of the time the Wellingtons sported each generation being a more glamorous one from the last. However this beauty wasn’t something they were born with, but something forced upon each generation. It never mattered if you were anything but beautiful and appealing to the public eye, and ultimately vain.

Daniel wasn’t expected for much due to his more unique apparent from his relatives, and was treated as the runt of the family. Daniel despises his family much more than they ever could with how they monitored his life for every action and relationship he had, and even his food. Despite being the runt, the Wellingtons would never let the public know of the treatment of their son.

Everything would change when a “sudden” incident at school leaving a ten year old Daniel scared on his right eye would take him straight to the hospital. The doctors told the Wellingtons he would only need the wound cleaned, but the family decided to pay for plastic surgery. The worse had yet to pass as the surgery proved to fail with infected tissue having to be removed around Daniel’s right eye leaving him partially blind.

During the time of Daniel’s recovery he dreamt of a strange place, a meadow that stretched for miles as he sat on an old medal bench. From right beside him was an open record player with a disk of gold playing a familiar and yet aberrant tune. Simply listening it beckoned him to reach out and take the disk, but before he could even touch it, Daniel awoke. That day the family was in a panic after Daniel suddenly disappeared. Bounties were placed to find him and bring him back, but strangely none of the hunters could find him, nor did some of them come back alive.

Stand: Drum Eye

Drum Eye is a mid range stand ( 5-30 meters) artificial humanoid type stand that activates its ability by beating the surrounding air, or sky, like a drum to produce shockwaves. Daniel can utilize this ability by beating the air with one of his limbs, but the power of the shockwave will differ depending on force. No items can be used to beat the drums Drum Eye creates, and only the user can physically touch them. The user can use this ability to provide temporary flight by jumping and activating it while air is right below him.

The stand, while generally unaware about Daniel’s actions, does show signs of annoyance when its user overreacts with aggression.

Other Information: Upon the family hiring a bounty hunter the night after Daniel’s escape, his stand had subtly awakened as he ran through alleyways with the surrounding walls falling. The ensuing collapse of the buildings had trapped the hunter in rubble and burying them alive.

Stats:

Power: B ( Strength of shockwave varies to users applied force, but can still attack without ability)

Speed: D ( Vary’s to how fast force is applied to air drum, and the stand moves relatively human speeds)

Range: B

Durability: C

Precision: C ( The shockwaves are more area of effect, and the user and stand are partially blind)

Potential: D

This was really fun to do, and the character actually helped with fleshing out a part of my fan part that has been nagging at me. Again i would like to thank u/BudgetKey6634 as they were the original creator for the stand and character idea, hope you like it, and have a great day.

Edit: I’d like to say this was also my first time drawing a stand and character for someone else, so i hope it looks as great as you envisioned it.

User: Mary Ann Discoteca

Age: 26

Gender: Female

Height: 5’11”

Info: Mary Ann Discoteca is the Italian born daughter of her record store owning Italian father. Her mother was a model who rarely visited and eventually left Mary Ann and her father for another man. Her father’s record store, The Panic at the Disco, was small and easily unseen. The surrounding gangs used the shop as a rudimentary meeting spot, but were driven out by other rival gangs.

Her father passed due to what was believed to be an unknown illness till autopsy found a shard of some old relic was extract from her father’s hands as if protecting it. Mary Ann was mailed this shard piece by an anonymous sender, from which stated that a boy will come to retrieve the shard and until then to keep it safe and keep it hidden.

Mary Ann inspected the shard after opening the letter, which had unknowingly cut her palm without realizing.

Mary Ann still works at her father’s record shop waiting for the mysterious boy in the letter to arrive in Italy.

Stand Name: Victorious

A mid-range (20-30 meters) artificial humanoid type stand that activates its ability by stabbing the blades it forms on its body into a living target. After stabbing the target, the victim’s current emotional state prior to the ability’s activation becomes extremely heightened and focused on that specific emotion. This will also blur the affected’s senses in various ways depending on emotion. The effect will get stronger as the victim gets closer to the user or stand with the opposite also being true ( The farther the victim gets the effect will weaken). However, the effect will complete stop if the victim can get out of the stand’s range or far enough to gain control of their senses and knock the user unconscious. Victorious can’t adjust how extreme its ability is unless the user is able to create distance.

Mary Ann can use Victorious on herself to temporarily to boost her natural physical capabilities by forcing her body to flood with adrenaline and dopamine to ease her pain but not numb her pain. The drawback of this is that her body will start to go numb the longer she is in this state ( roughly after 5-7 minutes). She can also use this boost on other people, but will only last for 2-3 minutes.

Victorious is fully or somewhat autonomous as it displays annoyance or skepticism for own user’s overly optimistic views on any given situation. The stand can make its own decisions as in alerting Mary Ann of an attack or fighting for her without Mary Ann knowing.

Ex. of the Victorious’s ability:

- A man is currently holding Mary Ann at gun point. The man is desperate and afraid of the police catching him, and at that moment the stand activates and stabs the man’s hand. Instead of the man feeling pain he feels immense paranoia and dread as his vision spirals and blurs. He sees the people around him as some “thing“ trying to get him, but he is too terrified to move. As the police car drives away the man regains his senses and looks around at the policemen seeing them as normal people.

- Mary Ann uses Victorious and stabs herself with it. The wounds she sustained aren’t gone , but her physical abilities have strengthened. She still feels every wound, but register it correctly as the bolts towards the knife wielding thug. After the fight she collapses on the pavement, conscious but unable to move as all the pain comes rushing all at once.

Stats

Power: B ( is strong enough to stab through concrete )

Speed: A ( the activation of the effect is nearly instantaneous after being stabbed)

Range: B

Durability: C ( The stand may be strong and can ease the user’s pain, but can be harmed like a normal human by another stand user)

Precision: B

Potential: C ( Mary Ann has had her stand for around a year where as Joey had his for a few months, and uses her stand in everyday life)

Hi again👋 if you read the last post about my other character then I believe you get the idea that I’m going to create a fan part, but currently I am going to ask for criticism, questions or comments on the characters and stands that will be adding to the fan part. To be honest the reason I’m saying this is to also provide an explanation for the stand user’s “info“ part in the description and by no means is to promote anything ( even though I don’t entirely know what that means nor do I want to come across doing such ) and is just a fun little project I want to do. I don’t really know why I felt the need to say that, but I felt like I had too. Anyway, I hope everyone under”stands” ( pun intended) and any questions, comments, and criticism I’ll happily answer too.

Other than all that, thank you reading and have a great day or night.

User: Joey Abbacchio

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Height: 5’9”

Info: Joey Abbacchio is the younger relative of Leone Abbacchi, and was born in Italy to an American mother. His mother brought him to the Americas along with her due the gangs living in their area. As for Joey’s father, no photograph or image of what he looked like was ever found and so he was soon forgotten till a letter arrived containing the shard of some kind of antique. The shard had cut Joey’s finger upon opening.

Stand Name: Radio Star

A short range (5 meters) artificial humanoid stand that activates its ability be touching a nonliving object or enclosed space with its left hand ( size of the space should be relative to the average size of a hotel room ). After doing so one of the disk will rewind the object‘s original arrangement bringing it to the exact space and arrangement it was in five minutes prior. What counts as one object is anything whole that the user touches with its left hand or smaller objects that can fit in its left hand that must be of the same material. However, after rewinding the five minutes will play out and the user and anyone else can interact with the object in anyway, but after time is up the object will go back into the state it was in prior to activation. This is because the object isn’t restored, but is in its correct arrangement. Also any sound that the object itself made prior will made again in the five minute play.

As for how rooms work, instead of the ability to puts things back into the right arrangement any sound that was made in the room prior to activation will be played again for user and others to hear.

Radio Star has to rewind and play out the object or space for the allotted ten minutes it takes to use its ability, but the user can adjust how far the ability rewinds by pressing its rods unto the disk at the right time. The user has three uses of its ability ( three disk ). The disk can be stacked to increase the rewind by five minutes, but the same rule applies that the ability must rewind and play out fully .

The disk can be broken to force the final state of the object or stop the playing of noise for the space. For objects specifically, they will reach the final state in a volatile fashion.

The initial activation of the ability is close range, but after is as far as the object was prior to activation.

Examples of how the ability work:

- A cup falls of the table and breaks in two and spills the fluid inside in only 1 minute. Activation of Radio Star would mean that Joey has to press the rod in at the 1 minute mark, and the cup would be put back together unto the table, but the liquid was not brought back into the cup. Until the one minute is up, the cup will remain fixed together but will break in two again.

- If a gun was fired, the stand would have to touch all bullets fired simultaneously then activate its ability to send them back into the gun, but the bullets will eventually be propelled again. If the user touched the gun, the gun wouldn’t fire bullets but instead make the motion of firing and the sound will not firing anything provided it’s empty.

What counts as the object’s state prior is what the object was doing and what it was exactly as activation occurred.

- Breaking a disk that rewound a broken cup would have the cup shatter in a burst of shards, but now the disk can’t be used till the next day and Joey has the feeling of his left side being broken ( imagine being punched so hard in the left ribs or left arm that they broke).

Stats:

Power: C ( Not super strong in physical combat )

Speed: C ( rewind can be sped up, but the playback itself remain in the allotted time frame.)

Range: A

Durability: B

Precision: A

Potential: A ( Joey only recently acquired his stand and isn’t using all the abilities I typed out)

I thank you for reading this, and if you did to ask me any questions or make comments or give constructive feedback of any kind as it would really help with fleshing out the stand and user further.