Chance me for Baruch AFTER I appeal bc I got rejected today :(
Demographics: Female, Pakistani, NY resident, public school, first-gen, low-income, applying for aid
Intended Major: Philosophy (Pre-Law)
Testing: Test optional (not submitting SAT/ACT or AP scores)
Academics
- GPA: 90 UW and 94 Weighted (100 scale) - Upward trend senior year shown in my mid year report (Overall GPA increase by 2 points in weighted and 1 point in unweighted in just 2 quarters after experiencing the peak of my hardship during my junior year - my essay is written on this)
- Course Rigor: 9AP/IB + 5 Dual Enrollment/College Classes + 4-5 Honors Classes including senior year schedule
- Taking 5 AP exams and 4 IB Exams this year
Awards/Honors
- Principal’s Honor Roll (9–12)
- 3× First Place Regional Speech Competition Awards
- Town of Islip Student Ambassador Award
- Brandeis University Book Award + Scholarship Recipient
- On-A-Roll Academic & Leadership Award
- AP Scholar
- NHS, Rho Kappa Honor Society, NAHS
- Academic Medal of Excellence
Extracurriculars & Leadership:
- President: Philosophy Club (founding president)
- President: Rho Kappa Honor Society
- President: History & Politics Club
- President & Founder/Mentor : Speech Competition Club for URM groups
- Vice President: National Art Honor Society
- Secretary: Student Government
- Executive Council: National Honor Society
- Head Anchor & Editor: Student Media Network
- Social Media Manager: Student Media Network
- Student Ambassador for my district - district appointed
Community & Advocacy:
- Junior Manager, Community Soup Kitchen (500+ hours)
- Governor’s Youth Leadership Council – District selection
- Food Drive/Pantry Leader – helped communities after SNAP reductions
- Anti-Bias Initiative Ambassador
- Building Safety Team Student Representative
- Youth and community alliance - district appointed student rep.
- Compassion Without Borders - District appointed student rep.
Healthcare & Research Experience:
- Clinical Volunteering & Shadowing (30 hrs shadowing + 100 volunteering hours)
- Columbia University Summer Program – Ethical disparities in cancer care among URM groups
Mentorship & Education:
- Peer Mentor, Freshman Transition Mentor
- Community Educator for URM groups - I was actually one of the kids who was learning from these people as a kid, and loved it so much I started teaching in 8th grade and recruited more people as teachers. I continue it to this day and spend about 5-7 hours a week here!
Languages
English, Urdu, Pashto, Arabic
Other Notes:
- Strong upward trend senior year, counselor will explain junior-year dips
- Extremely strong letters of recommendation (one of them from NYU alum (my APUSH teacher & history & politics club advisor which I am the president of), my principal, and my College Psych or AP Bio teacher.
- Strong essays demonstrating philosophy passion, ethical reasoning, and community impact
- Strong hardship background: poverty, unstable home environment, caregiving responsibilities, periods of sleeping in mosque during winter, lack of heat, heavy household responsibilities
- Explains academic struggles + strong upward trend + leadership development in essays and in additional info section
The mentoring work I do now for URM groups is deeply personal because I was once in their shoes. As a child, my parents couldn’t afford a full-time school for me and my siblings, so I attended religious classes at the mosque, the same community where my family relied on the soup kitchen for meals. In fact, there were times when we couldn’t pay our rent, and we spent the night at the mosque. Growing up, all six of us lived in a single-room basement, and I never had my own bed or personal space, which made it difficult to develop my own identity. My parents’ strictness and the social isolation I experienced were particularly challenging for someone like me, naturally drawn to communication and expressing ideas. Despite these hardships, I found a deep sense of solace and purpose in the mosque’s programs. What began as a place of survival, where I learned and grew, became a place of service: I now teach Sunday school there, mentoring URM students, helping them find confidence and guidance in their public speaking skills and religious studies, much as I once did as a child. These experiences, paired with witnessing and navigating personal, familial, and financial struggles, have fueled my passion for philosophy, ethical reasoning, and community impact.