u/One_Elephant7992

Just a dude that loves coding and wanted to release an app. Would these screenshots make you try the app?
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Just a dude that loves coding and wanted to release an app. Would these screenshots make you try the app?

Hey everyone — I have a personal finance app on the App Store and I'm thinking about revising my screenshots. I've already done some tweaking on the title, subtitle, and keywords but haven't seen much movement, so I'm turning my attention to the screenshots now. I'd love some honest feedback on what I currently have.

I went with real app screens paired with short headlines. My thinking was that people want to see what they're actually getting before they download.

A few questions:

  • Do the first 2-3 screenshots communicate the value quickly enough for someone scrolling?
  • Are the headlines compelling, or do they feel too generic?
  • Would you lead with a different screen? I'm debating whether the financial health score or the budgeting view is a stronger hook.
  • Does the overall style feel polished enough, or is there something you'd change?

Open to any feedback. Thanks in advance.

u/One_Elephant7992 — 8 days ago