Horrific story in one part

Thomas' POV

Since I met Peter, I wanted to become him. He is tall and handsome, and I'm in the average size and beauty. Since we've both interest in video games, we became friends very quickly.

But I have an other interest I've never talked to him about until last week: body swap.

I told him I can easily steal his girlfriend if I get into his body. He asked me playfully how I would do that, and I've told him about the body swap curse I almost mastered at this point. He looked at me and said : "You're crazy, Tom"

Today he's turning 20, and I feel ready to exchange our bodies for a week. I'm in the window in front of him, he's right in front of me, I cast my curse...

When the body swap was done, I feel something is wrong. I'm aching everywhere : the legs, the arms, even...wait, he doesn't have a penis?

When I looked down, I realized I totally missed the swap : I'm in the body of Peter's grandmother.

When I looked at the window, I saw my body being euphoric and leaving very happily. I understand : for her, it's a break from the pain.

My new body is so old, so fragile, I wonder how I will stay alive for one week in here...

Peter's grandfather POV

I look at my wife, my precious darling of 50 years. Even after all these years, she's still the most gorgeous woman ever to my eyes.

I hope she doesn't see my tears. I don't want her to know. I want her to be happy until the end.

World is so cruel : why do her bone cancer have to win over her in three days?

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 day ago

I've became my ex's husband?! (Final part)

When I reopened my eyes, I wasn't in a car, nor in my bedroom.

I was in my young body, in a hotel room, with two girls asleep and naked next to me. I see he had fun as me.

I took my phone and read the messages. The girlfriend I had before the swap has broke up with me, because he was a cheater.

Good thing. I don't have to do it myself.

I said "goodbye" to the girls, before calling Ann.

"I'm in my parents' house, she said."

When I arrived, she is hunging Abby, who is crying uncontrollably.

"They are dead, she can only whisper...

- For good, I wanted to say, but only thought."

Ann then said :

"I'm the only adult of the family who can take care of Abby. I have to raise her."

I answered :

"It's okay. I'll be by your side."

She smiled, before asking :

"I know it's only a month we're together, but, Mark...Will you marry me?"

I didn't said a word. But when we both moved all our stuff to our new commun house, I said yes.

In a few months, Ann will be my wife. Now, she is in my arms, after the sex we just had.

We also promised we'll never mess with body swap again...

...The end?

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 3 days ago

I've became my ex's husband?! (Part 9)

One month had passed

My girlfriend is now Ann. It's over with the other one. Like any couple, we kiss, we hold our hands, we say we love each other whenever we can.

Abby has noticed it, and has strangely accepted all that. We became closer, since I'm not a stranger anymore, but her sister's boyfriend.

It's been two months I had been swapped with the father, and it's been more than two years for Ann, trapped in her mother's body. Now that we're together in our suffering, that we became more and more ourselves in these old bodies, we almost accepted our fates...

Until Abby told us, one night, to follow her.

We can't wait to see her secret, so we all went in the woods.

In front of a gigantic tree, she grabbed a shovel and started to dig, until she reveals a box.

"It's my secret...No one knows about it, not even mom and dad. It's swap devices. I wanted to keep them for myself, but...you need it more than me. I had them for a month, but I've forgotten where I hid them... Sorry."

We just thanked her, tears in our eyes. Finally, we'll be young again. Finally, we'll get our lives back.

We went back to home, and when Abby slept, we made a plan. We have the perfect idea to swap back and punish these two monsters at the same time.

With our swap devices activated, we got in the car.

Swap cancellation in 5 minutes

We went at a normal speed to the beach.

Swap cancellation in 3 minutes

We're now in the beach. We just have to go to the water.

Swap cancellation in 10 seconds...

The car is completely immerged.

9...

We hold our swap devices closer.

8...

We hold our hands.

7...

We kissed.

6...

"We'll see each other tomorrow", Ann said.

5...

"For sure", I answered.

4...

But...

3...

What if...

2...

The swap devices...

1...

Don't work?

Swap cancellation. Don't move during the process

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 4 days ago

I've became my ex's husband?! (Part 8)

I won't adress Ann's mom post. Read my posts and hers, and make your own opinion. I don't really care if you believe me or not. I just need to share my experience.

I'm now going to the gym everyday. It's so euphoric to lift heavy stuffs again, to make my body work out, and to go home completely sweaty. I thought it would be tough, since my body is old, but no injuries happened so far.

Day after day, I feel like I'm falling in love with Ann. I also feel like I'm less and less romantically bound to my girlfriend. I tried to call her : she didn't believe me and called me an asshole, trying to ruin "Mark"'s life again. If she knew the actual Mark was in there...

Abby has accepted her "dad" and "mom" are actually me and her sister. She's still distant to us nonetheless. Like if she's hiding a secret...

I'll keep you updated.

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 13 days ago

I don't pretend, Mark

I'm addressing Mark's post from yesterday. I'm really not happy about it. If I kissed that girl, it's because she had a crush on me. If I dressed cute in my daughter's body, it's to feel attractive. That's all. I'm not a liar.

Actually, I doubt I'm the liar here...You told you had sex yesterday. If you were really unhappy about the swap, you wouldn't have done this. You said yourself it felt good. In fact, you wouldn't be happy if a swap back happened, because you wouldn(t be able to fuck my old body again.

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 16 days ago

I've became my ex's father?! (Part 7)

(Maybe I should change the title since I realized I was actually dating Ann's mother)

Speaking about Ann's mother, I saw her post up here. Fucking liar, I swear. Yesterday, I went outside for the first time in two weeks, since piece by piece, I'm being more myself even in this asshole body. I saw her, in Ann's body, in the park kissing an other young girl with a lot of pleasure. Yes, she's definitively into girls, but not into 50 yo women like she pretended. No, she isn't an other victim. She clearly appreciate being her own daughter, an hot asf 20 yo.

I was ready to punch her in the face, but other people would just see a crazy old man punching a lesbian, so I refrained myself.

Like I said, I'm progressively healing. The day after my last post, I was reasy to risk it all. I told Ann about my feelings, she said she understood and hugged me. The following day, she bought me new clothes, similar to those I wore before that fateful swap. I thought I would look weird, being an old man with youngster clothing, but actually, I looked good.

Day after day, I became closer to Ann and Abby. Day after day, I changed my look to be more myself. Today, I'll try to enter a sport club again.

Finally, this morning, something happened. Ann and I were alone, then all of a sudden, Ann closed her eyes, bent her me and kissed me on the lips. This time wasn't gross, it felt just...perfect. After, she said : "I genuinely like you, Mark. Why did we have to be swapped with my fucking parents?!" She started crying, I hugged her and then, somehow...

We ended up in the bedroom.

I never thought two 50 yo could have such sensations from it. We didn't think more about our swaps, we were just lying. Actually, our souls made love too.

The more I think about it, the more I remind how much it was extatic and how much it was fucked up at the same time. Ann told me to stop worrying about it, during the time in the bedroom, she just saw Mark, not her father's body, just like I just saw Ann, not a old lady.

I know she is right, but still...

I'm supposed to have a girlfriend, but I never felt so strong feelings for Ann. I'm so lost and confused. Maybe sport will help me a bit.

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 17 days ago

AITA for not being able to stop my husband?

(It's part of Mark's story)

In one sentence : My husband swapped me with my own daughter, and he recently told me he swapped with a guy he forced me to date.

To tell you a bit more : Three years ago, I've discovered I was actually lesbian. One year later, I told Mickael I wanted to divorce (you know...for me to finally date ladies). He just told me no.

The following day, I woke up as Ann. When I heard screams with my voice, my blood froze.

We both went towards Mickael, with a face that said "Why the fuck did you swap us?" He answered it would ruin his life to go through a divorce. He did it so that I can be with young ladies.

I said something like : "What? No, I want to be with women as old as me!" He brutally said to me : "Old ladies are so inattractive, you got back your youth, you have nothing to complain about" And he said to Ann : "A good daughter should be ready to do anything for their parents, even if you have to lose your beauty"

So he was basically saying that my body is ugly...

I tried to convince him to undo this swap by every way possible. He never did. I never told anything, and so did Ann, because you have a greater chance to be sent to a mental asylum than to be swapped back against my husband's will.

He forced me to date any boy in Ann's high school, and if I didn't do so, he would swap me with an handicaped 80-years old lady. He added he is the only one with a swap device here and so he controlled everything.

So I dated Mark, the poor guy my husband would swap with a few weeks ago.

I left my house a few months later, because Mickael behavior towards Ann was...creepy and disgusting. I'm still blaming myself for it, but I never called the police (they would just see a husband being romantic to his wife...ew!) and I fleed the house as soon as I could.

I never talked to Mickael since I left, I'm so ashamed for my potential responsability in ruining the lives of Ann and Mark (and even maybe Abby) I never talked to them, the simple thought of my husband having sex with many 20 yo or so girls as he said is sending me shivers through my spine, I'm pretending to be Ann to her friends...

So, please tell, AITA, and, more importantly, what can I do to fix this?

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 24 days ago

I've became my ex's father?! (Part 6)

TW : Implied s-word thoughts

Unfortunately, it's still Mark posting on here...It has been a week and I hate my body, but also my life in general.

I'm avoiding mirrors and looking down as much as I can. I'm avoiding Ann and her sister as much as I can. Every time Abby sees me, she runs away, like any child would do when they see a stranger, even in their father's body.

Every time Ann sees me, she does a little fake smile, in an attempt to support me.

They're both so nice and gentle, how is it possible they have such assholes as parents?

I thought about seeing a psychologist about, you know, my situation, but what they could do? Just listening. Not swapping us back, or retain themselves for sending me to a mental asylum. Even if they could, I'll have to wait for MONTHS and pay THOUSAND OF DOLLARS, for just being heard. Our mental health support is so faulty...

I'm losing every hope, every dream I'm trying to keep, at least just to have a reason to stand every passing day. Help me, for the sake of me, the only solution I see to get me out of my living hell is really not good...

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 month ago

I've became my ex's father?! (Part 5)

TW : my mental health is getting worse

Since some of you were curious about our looks, here are they : the first photo is a pic of Ann before she swaped (on Instagram), the second one is her after she swaped (on the website of the hospital she works in), then the third one was me before the swap (on Instagram too), and finally the fourth is a pic of me trapped in "my" new body I just took.

Yesterday, I showed Ann the jewelleries I've found in the afternoon. She tried to put them, but it didn't work : they weren't swap devices. I was pissed, and Ann said : "I've tried everything. We'll be them forever." She cried for thirty minutes after saying it.

I don't want to lose my hope to be Mark again, but it feels fake, even to myself.

And it got even stronger when today, I've craved so strong for tobacco I cried from it. I've never realized an addiction could physically hurt, convincing me to never touch a cigarette in my life.

But for how long will my will be strong enough? Will I eventually become as perverted as him? I'll fight against it, of course, but for how long?

Also, he said in his mail he would smoke a lot in my body, so if there's a swap back, will I be addicted? He also said he wanted many "girlfriends" (you know what I mean), so will I be single? What if I got expelled from uni? What if he turns all my family and friends against me? What if he destroys my appartment?

So many concerning questions who would be unanswered...

I slowly become more and more anxious, self-aware, crazy. Just thinking about going outside in this body, seeing and being seen in this body, or even being in this body create in my stomack a ball of hairs.

I can't stand being in the bag of meat of this fucked up old man. I don't eat and sleep anymore. I just want to be invisible even to myself, to dissapear, or just be a happy 20 year-old student as I was before this monster takes my body and my life.

On this subject, I've argued with Ann. I'll write it as I remembered it from this morning :

Ann : Breakfast's ready!

Me (drinking a glass of water) : I'm not hungry.

Ann : ...You know you can't begin a day with just a glass of water, right?

Me : Why not? I won't do anything today.

Ann : Not even the chores? You quitted your job because you wanted to do them.

Me : No. It's because it sucked.

Ann : So what? You'll pass your day ruminating about how great it was to be young?

Me : How great it would have been. Our youths were stolen.

Ann : That won't help you in anything. C'mon, eat and move your ass. You'll feel better when you'll have an other goal in life than going back to your body.

Me : I can't have an other goal without being myself!

Ann : You're genuinely pissing me off! You're talking and acting childly! Just fit in your new life!

Me : It would just be hell! I'll rather die than pretending to be that guy for the rest of my time on Earth!

Ann : And so do I want to! But we have no other choice, Mark!

Me : Do you think I like being an old toxicomaniac?!

Ann : And do you think I like being MY OWN FUCKING MOTHER?!

We just forgot a little detail in our argument : Abby was here.

And from the way she was avoiding looking at us, softly crying, she heard everything.

Enraged, Ann throwed a hot cup of coffee to me, before leaving in the kitchen. Thanks to my old sports reflexs, I dodged it, but not the cupboard, who was left deeply stained.

I tried to confort Abby, but when she saw me approaching, she fleed upstairs.

I guess I'll spend the rest of my short life, rotting in the garden of my ex's suburds house, in her father's body, craving for cigs, while this less-than-human fuckshit will be happy to imagine my suffering and to ruin my body.

u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 month ago

I've became my ex's father?! (Part 4) (Read the meta-intro before seeing the images)

Meta-intro : I'm sorry for the low quality of the "mails". Basically, it's just written text, with a French error detector (...) just because I don't want to use AI too much. Anyway, I hope you'll still enjoy the story!

Look at the mails these two perverts were sending to each other...Ann and me were just pieces of meat for them! They disgust me to the highest point! How low do you have to be to just deshumanize someone and destroy their life, or even worse, YOUR OWN DAUGHTER just your own pleasure?!

Ok, let's just calm down for a second...

Like I said in a comment on the part 3, I've recieve a voice text from my girlfriend. She didn't believe me, of course. She called me a pervert (if only she saw what I read...) and tell me she had hot sex with "Mark". I don't know if that's the truth or if it's just to annoy who she believes to be the man I hate the most. It was a bad idea.

When Ann got home, yesterday, I hugged her and whispered in her ear : "I know who you truly are". She didn't answer, she just cried in my arms. I also did. We both needed to express our suffering in these old bodies who belong to two pieces of fuckshits.

Abby didn't understood what was happened, but neither of us were ready to tell her.

Today, I've printed a scan of his ID, insurance card and social security attestation. I'll keep them preciously. I also found jewelleries hidden under a white dress...

While going back to home, I've came by a tobacco dealer, and had all the difficulties in the world to retain myself to buy some...It's time to go back to sports.

So, please tell me, should we tell Abby? Try to confront Ann's parents (even if it would disgust me)? Are these swap devices? Thanks for your precious help!

u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 month ago

New rule : Slop Saturday

Masturbation, tight, too long, wet, gay and femboy-centered fun facts are now only allowed on Saturday.

My cousin is my dad's niece.

It won't apply to posts made before the rule writing.

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 month ago

I've became my ex's father?! (Part 3) (Read the text firstly)

(Reveal the image when I'll tell to)

First of all, I'm glad to announce I'm now jobless.

Second of all, I haven't seen "Ann" at all since the beginning of the swap (may be understand when you'll see the pic)

Thirdly, following one of your kind advice (thanks again), I've spotted a weird discussion between "Ann's mom" and...the incestuous perv who swaped with me (you can reveal the image now)

I'm actually speechless.

To conclude, since I'll be alone all day, I will try to contact my girlfriend, do the chores according to what I said to Ann, try to find a way to undo both swaps.

And tonight we'll have a serious "family" talk.

Wish me good luck, and if you have anything to say about all that, don't refrain from commenting

u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 month ago

My favorite body swap tropes I want to write about someday

"Someday" because I want to stay focused on Mark's story for the moment.

* Couple swap, but with a twist : a couple want to swap together for some reason, but during the process, an unsuspecting person/animal came here and swap with a member of the couple (strongly inspired by a comic, instead in the comic, it's two friends. If I find it, I'll put the link)

* Transphobe/Trans person, Racist/Non-white person kind of pairings

* Two patients : after they woke from their surgery, they realize they are in someone else's body...

* Family swap but everyone is mixed up (ex : mom/son, dad/dog and daughter/baby)

What y'all think about them? Do you enjoy other unusual body swap tropes? Do you know other pieces of media which depicts them? Let's all discuss!

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u/Own_Emergency7779 — 1 month ago