The book Saint Celine is terrible and it's the FMC's fault! Has anyone else read it because I need to get this off my chest?
So, I'm almost finished with {Saint Celine} and oh! My! God! This has to be the WORST FMC I have ever read.
For context, I love kick-ass FMCs with self-preservation instincts. Jade from {Stronger Series} and Lana from {Mind F*ck Series} were chef's kiss. I also love morally grey, selfish FMCs like the chick from {Limerence by HC Dolores}, who is ambitious. Hell, I love flawed FMC's too like Piya from {5000 Nights of Obsession} or Gianna from {The Maddest Obsession}.
You get the gist. I don't discriminate as long as the writer can convince me of the FMCs' choices and actions.
But never have I read such an irredeemable character as Celine. I'm at 80% of the book, and I want to throw my Kindle across the room.
Here's the sequence of events:
>!Katherine befriends the FMC Celine, who is of similar age and also her housekeeper's daughter. They meet when they are only 11 or 12. Kathleen recognizes Celine's ambition and gets her admitted to her prep school, She gives Celine all her expensive clothes, her graduation present: a car, even gets her parents to pay for Celine's education and lies to everyone about her background so she can fit in with the rich kids. !<
>!How does our fearless FMC reward Katherine? Celine steals the first guy Katherine likes and here is the kicker. Celine didn't even like the guy, yet she took him just because she could. Can you say 'pick me' energy? !<
>!That wasn't enough. She plagiarized, YES PLAGIARIZED, a paper Katherine worked really hard on, put her name on it, and used it to secure herself an internship. When Katherine threatened to expose her, SHE KILLED HER BEST FRIEND. Like WTF! I have read many selfish FMCs, but never with so many irredeemable qualities. I hate 'pick me' girls and FMCs who violate the girl code (reminds me of crazy fake friends from middle and high school). !<
Reading about such a vindictive FMC and expecting us to root for her made no sense. Yes, characters should be flawed, but there have to be SOME redeeming qualities that make us want to keep reading.
I know some people think we are harder on FMCs than MMCs, but if an MMC did those awful things to his best friend, I wouldn't finish the book either. The characters need to be somewhat loyal to their core crew (even if they are killers or monsters) and this FMC violated every girl code.
Am I alone in feeling this way?
Did anyone else find this FMC's qualities redeemable?
Does this book get any better? The only way this will be an HEA for me is if someone takes the FMC out.