u/PeteFletzer

I used the tool on the Van Ryder games site. So cool.

Hi all! I’m about to send my card game to print for the first batch of testers and influencer copies. It’s a relatively simple game - learn in 5 minutes, games last 15-20.

This is the first two pages of the rule book. I’d love your feedback. I’m also including an illustration from the last page that illustrates what a Sand Slicer looks like.

So my questions for you all: Is it engaging? Is it too vague? Does it make you want to play? Does the world and the game sound interesting? I realize it’s a 2 page spread from a 2.5” x 3.5” booklet, but hoping it pulls players in. Any comments - positive and critical - are welcome. Thank you!!!

So, I have seen a bunch of inserts on the various 3d print sites that try to make it easy to keep all the Final Girl pieces together. But they all tried to shoe horn them into one of the existing boxes. I decided to create my own "big box" that can hold all the pieces and parts for the Core Set plus the Box of Props. It also holds all the action cards, Final Girls from whatever sets you have, and the unique character items (eyes only) for them. I made it easier to pluck victims from the box as well as added a removable, easy access tray for heart health markers. I also am quite pleased with the coffin that keeps all the tiny little pieces like the time marker and blood lust splat. There's even a special spot just for the horror track marker!

Let me know what you think!

Thank you all for the comments and feedback on my original card design. I've listened and taken alot of your input to heart. You were right on a bunch of things, so I wanted to share where I've come down. (There are multiple parts from different manufacturers. Here's all the engines.

And, if you want to check the original from a few days ago: https://www.reddit.com/r/BoardgameDesign/comments/1utwuqh/enough_photoshop_to_be_dangerous/

I have enough photoshop skill to get by. But I’ve decided to design the cards for my own card game coming to crowdfunding in october. Would love the group’s impression on these. The style, the look, etc. The parts jave been taken from the 3d CAD I created for game parts. Ive abused some photoshop filters to get this comic book look.

The game features scouring a salvage field to pull scrap parts and build your best vehicle. It’s based on the big box game world I’m creating for spring 2027 release.
Honest opinions appreciated.

I built a browser version of my card game specifically for playtesting.

No download.

No account required.

Games take around 15 minutes.

You’re competing against AI opponents while I collect anonymous gameplay statistics to improve the physical version.

If you have a few minutes I’d really appreciate hearing:
What was your favorite moment?
Did anything feel unfair?
Would you play another round?

Here’s the link:

https://playfixr.base44.app

Thanks!