u/Pizzapesca

Hi everyone,

I recently wrote this piece to process a sudden and devastating event—the unexpected passing of my mother when she was only 42. It’s an exploration of the "split" that happens after a trauma: when the mind tries to use philosophy and detachment to survive, but the body refuses to forget and stays on high alert.

I’m looking for honest feedback on the flow, the emotional resonance, and the writing style. :

https://medium.com/@amonontihoraccontato/the-end-arrives-at-42-da4b843d48b9?sharedUserId=amonontihoraccontato

Hi everyone! I’m new to the Medium community. I’m currently going through a really tough breakup and feeling completely heartbroken. To help myself heal and find a healthy distraction, I’ve decided to dive into writing.

I would love to read your work and connect with this community. Could you please share your Medium profiles in the comments? I’d love to check out your beautiful writing and support each other.

You can also find my profile here if you'd like to connect: https://medium.com/@amonontihoraccontato

Thank you so much.