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The Cosmogony of My World

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In the beginning there was nothing — only four primordial monsters. The Angel and the Demon, eternal opposites. The Dragon and the Ice Giant, equally opposed. At some point they collided, and from that collision the world was born. Their bodies became the four continents, and at the center, where everything connects, the Lake of Balance formed.

The Progenitors

From each primordial, immortal beings called Progenitors were born — carrying within them the essence of their creator.

From the Angel: Anher (light), Altheia (kindness), Solana (nature)

From the Ice Giant: Kvazir (cold), Akhtiel (suspicion), Miulden (metal)

From the Dragon: Tourak (strength), Neith (fire)

From the Demon: Vekgiel (darkness), Enza (manipulation)

The Progenitors didn't stay still. They wandered the world, pairing with one another and producing children who carried blended essences. Some of those children became Progenitors in their own right:

Engir (passion) and Inis (freedom) — children of the Dragon and Angel lineages — united and brought Enki (the arts) into the world. Later, Enki and Sobek (knowledge) created Dulahan (self-interest) — one of the youngest and darkest essences to ever enter the world.

The Twelve Races

From the unions of the Progenitors came the twelve races, spread across the four directions surrounding the Lake.

South

Elves — Anher (light) and Altheia (kindness). The purest expression of the Angel.

Hobbits — Kathor (joy) and Solana (nature). Warm and deeply rooted in the earth.

Imperials — Heiltar (duty) and Guin (order). A perfect balance of passion and cold reason.

East

Zymnians — Kvazir (cold) and Akhtiel (suspicion). Calculating, organized, and deeply distrustful.

Dwarves — Miulden (metal) and Asther (flame). The inner fire of the Dragon burning inside Ice Giant stone.

Gnomes — Sobek (knowledge) and Enki (the arts). Science and creativity fused into one.

West

Dragonkin — Tourak (strength) and Neith (fire). Raw power and flame — inevitable.

Humans — Engir (passion) and Inis (freedom). The most unpredictable of all races.

Ailurians — Dulahan (self-interest) and Eshir (deception). A younger race, with cunning and self-serving ambition in their very blood.

North

Vampires — Vekgiel (darkness) and Enza (manipulation). The most dangerous race in the world.

Orcs — Um Dugar (war) and Uliktar (courage). Born to fight.

Goblins — Kurtat (chaos) and Gkeb (envy). Chaotic and utterly unpredictable.

The four "pure" races — Elves, Zymnians, Dragonkin, and Vampires — are those born from two Progenitors of the same primordial. This is why they consider themselves superior to all others.

The Seven Ages

First Age — The Age of Progenitors

The Progenitors walked freely through the world. They paired, wandered, and quarreled. The world was alive with magic and mythical creatures.

Second Age — The Age of Races

The twelve races emerged and found their places. First structures formed, first alliances were made, first rivalries began.

Third Age — The Age of Chaos

Sub-races developed. Great conflicts erupted and magic was used without restraint. Seeing what their world had become, the Progenitors made a decision: they withdrew to the dark side of the planet — the "tails" of the primordial monsters — taking with them their children, their immortal descendants, and every mythical creature that had ever walked the earth.

Fourth Age — The Age of Fading

Magic was still present, but it was dimming. The races intermingled, bloodlines blurred, and with the magic faded the memory of what had come before.

Fifth Age — The Age of Shadow

The Vampires seized the opportunity. They managed to abduct one member of each pure race and feed their ruling Triumvirate, seizing control of the world.

Sixth Age — The Age of Betrayal

The captives died. The Triumvirate was betrayed from within. The Vampires lost their grip on the world and retreated into the shadows.

Seventh Age — The Present Age

Peace. Growth. Forgetting. The old stories became myths, and the myths were forgotten. The heroes of the past are nothing more than dusty names. And the Vampires, patient as ever, have quietly begun corrupting the world again.

This is where our story begins.

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u/Putrid_Chemical_7004 — 4 days ago
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A world built on the corpses of 4 cosmic beasts, where Vampires pull the strings from the shadows. Ask Me Anything about my world's lore!

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​The Hook:

In my high-fantasy world, the continents aren't tectonic plates—they are the literal, decaying remains of four ancient behemoths. At the center of it all lies the Lake of Balance, a spiritual node keeping the world alive. But the balance is shifting. While mortal Kings argue over territory, a shadow is rising from the dark side of the world.

​Here is a glimpse into the mechanics and factions of the world, without spoiling the upcoming novel:

​1. The Anatomy of the World

​The continents still retain the biological essence of the cosmic beasts they once were.

​The Dwarven Mountains burn with the residual inner heat of a creator's passion.

​The Zymnian Peaks are locked in perpetual, unnatural frost, breeding an isolationist caste of cold, suspicious mages who value genetic purity above all.

​2. The Puppet Masters (The Vampire Hierarchy)

​Vampires in this world rarely fight openly. Their entire strategy relies on infiltration, political corruption, and proxy wars.

​They use lower-status races (like Orcs and Goblins) to raid the borders of Humans and Elves, ensuring the mortal realms are too distracted by constant warfare to notice who is actually funding the conflict.

​Within Vampire society, social status is tied to blood-purity and lineage. Lower-caste Vampires are desperate to elevate their families, often leading to illegal practices in the dark corners of their realms.

​3. The Biological Variable: Orc Physiology

​Orcs are not inherently evil; they are driven by an intense primal instinct for war, inherited from their Progenitor. This makes them perfect shock troops, but they possess a unique biological defense mechanism:

​When a high-endurance race like an Orc is completely depleted of blood or placed in a state of extreme trauma, their heart rate drops to near-zero. They enter a deep, suspended hibernation. To the untrained eye, they appear completely dead, cold to the touch.

​4. The Rumor of the "Gnome Hoard"

​Mortal Kings and Dwarven Lords have recently gone into panic mode. Whispers are spreading about a forgotten "Treasure of the Gnomes" hidden in the northern tunnels. The factions believe it is an ancient super-weapon that can turn the tide of the coming war. However, the true nature of this treasure, and why the ancient Progenitors left it behind, remains buried in forbidden Elven archives.

​I am currently writing a novel based on this world. If you want to see how this world feels in action, I just uploaded Chapter 1 (a slow-burn, atmospheric intro) on Reddit/Wattpad! Link in the comments.

Ask me anything about the factions, the magic, or the world's creation!

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u/Putrid_Chemical_7004 — 6 days ago