I just bought the Mac Neo, and I'm still trying to figure out how to play games from Steam. Whisky is discontinued, as far as I know. Sikarugir doesn't work no matter what I try, and Crossover is an option, but it costs money, so I'm hesitant to go that route. If anyone has any suggestions, I would appreciate it.
It still needs a lot of fleshing out but I feel like it has potential, I also have some behind the scenes stuff that’s not mentioned in the story so if you have a question please ask and I’ll try to provide context and clarification as best I can.
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There once was a man born with a strange power. He had inherited vestiges of ash from a distant world, turning his body into a vessel for that energy. It was forbidden, granted to him neither by choice nor knowledge. Unaware of his hidden gift, he grew up stronger and more tireless than anyone around him.
This continued until his twentieth year. One day, during his routine, he suddenly saw a crimson-red energy forming on his hands, crackling with red lightning. An intense surge of power shot through him. Just as quickly, the aura vanished, though the energy inside him lingered.
Elsewhere, a woman was walking home when yellow energy flickered from her hands. Like the man, she had always been stronger and more energetic than her peers, raised in similar circumstances.
Months passed as the two struggled to control their abilities. They feared hurting others, yet longed to use their power for good. Their world was torn by conflict and lawlessness. Unknown to them, another person, also gifted with the same powers, had been quietly mastering their abilities for much longer. Far more intelligent and driven, this third figure had decided that since humanity could not protect itself, they alone would seize the power to do so and rule.
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tldr: I need help making this story feel more profound, and I wanted to see if anyone could help.
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