u/Remarkable_Main_7580

I adjusted some things and added some placeholder notes, hope it's better (also i don't know if its normal but teto makes the "T" and "D" sound like if they had an H, and it's really bugging me since it's much harder making a song like this)

I started with teto (I know that it's really difficult but she's my favorite) and i tried making from the start by laufey, i know its kinda terrible but could you give me some feedback?