u/Rk925thepro

I’m writing a novel and I think it might actually be good

So I’ve been developing this story for about 6 months and I finally started writing it. Here’s the teaser:

Eyes of the Fallen

by Rk925thepro

In a city swallowed by silence and decay, a boy named Mysen survives alone — grieving, lost, and unaware that the world didn’t end by accident.

Something caused it.

Something with red eyes.

And somewhere in the shadows of the ruins, another set of eyes watches over him. Patient. Protective. Familiar.

As Mysen is pulled into a world of survival, unlikely allies, and brutal training, the truth about his father — and the godlike forces tearing the world apart — will slowly surface.

The city fell for a reason.

And Mysen might be the only one who can bring it back.

“Eyes of the Fallen” — coming soon

I’m planning weekly 5000 word chapters with a goal of 200,000 words total. The story follows a boy named Mysen in a post apocalyptic world, but there’s a much deeper mythology running underneath everything that I can’t wait for people to discover. Would anyone actually read this?

So recently I’ve posted montages with the title AGGRESSIVE, and almost everyone has hated them both, yes, I will admit the first one was a bit too flashy, and seizure inducing. But the second one… my whole family liked it and no one else did, here’s the link for anyone who hasn’t seen it yet, https://www.reddit.com/r/ACCompetizione/comments/1t5l77u/aggressive/?%24deep_link=true&correlation_id=35557993-2c25-5979-b482-f0ca92d966b9&ref=email_post_reply&ref_campaign=email_post_reply&ref_source=email&target_user=Rk925thepro&utm_medium=Email%20Amazon%20SES&_branch_referrer=H4sIAAAAAAAAA3WOQU%2BEMBCFfw17A9aWgjUhZrPGmxf9AU2BASZbaDMtEj342x2iHk1mkpfvvTeZOaUQH8qSYBgwFTaEwuF6K2V4zEQlQwvGxhNLTzjhap3ZyLXz0crkJRPPPPu%2BF7%2F93i8MiPdyvfolQMJP9CswYGuBNUWWd0m5ptlY2WkiiBHfj0Qm%2BVo1AARz%2FJDJp0QbG3XvicDZxJcMDsylUqrRWuaiFypXutF5V92LfDz3VotB13WnuUcwchgWi84EH5MhCO7jxzC9XYLFaf0%2FEf1GPfz5DJOlCZLZIhDT15sWKs0QyJ%2B%2BOA9EuE6mI79zoH3xHTr%2B%2FvxmR0v4Dbg2Y59pAQAA&%243p=e_as&_branch_match_id=1582408869062102694

And the only people who posted a positive comment where u/HoardHorde 🖤 and u/MainBuy9899 🖤, and I put many hours into making this 14 second montage by hand as a 13yr old… and half an hour in itself just to word sync the song, I understand some people just hate to hate even if they genuinely liked it, but bro, only two people see the skill in it? I mean I agree the first one was a bit to much on the eyes, but I don’t quite understand why people hated it, pls give me y’all’s honest opinion on how I can make it better…