This is my first attempt at poetry, any feedback?
Lilies
Of course I’ll buy you flowers
Wrapped in plastic
With the string tied
Not because I’m meant to
Says the gurus
In the ink typed
Not to make you stay
Though I hope I’ll always hold you
And your grip stays forever tight
Don’t see it as repayment
For coming to my darkness
To show me there’s a thin light
Or leading me to the shore
When I couldn’t see
The near tide
But because I hope you’ll smile
Not for me but deep inside
Where, in that moment, you’re free
My love can’t be weighed in petals
When leaves decay with time
So lilies hold no power
But if they guaranteed a smile
Every day
I’d shop for flowers