u/SUNBELiSS

Hey so I got sent these song lyrics from a friend and I was wondering if someone could keep the same structure but change the lyrics and the mood entirely for me?
It’s a big ask but there is frame work and inspiration.
The inspiration is sort of a Suki Waterhouse / Lana Del Rey style song.

Thank you. Here is the lyrics:

[Verse 1]
Your jacket on my chair
Still smells like rain and smoke
Cherry stains on your sleeve
You laugh like it’s a joke
I trace the ring you wore
Then leave it where it lands
You pull me in too close
And wreck my careful hands

[Pre-Chorus]
Say my name like that
Slow and mean
Got my heart all bruised
In between
Hold me like a match
Right at the edge
I want the burn
I want the red

[Chorus]
Ash on velvet
Stay on me
Ash on velvet
Don’t set me free
Close enough to break
Soft enough to keep
Ash on velvet
Baby, sleep with me
(Ash on velvet)
(Ash on velvet)

[Verse 2]
Your boots by the door
Your keys in the blue bowl
Half-drunk grapefruit wine
Cold on my lower lip
You bite your words in half
Then let them out in gold
I know your kind of love
It grabs and doesn’t hold

[Pre-Chorus]
Say my name like that
Slow and mean
Got my heart all bruised
In between
Hold me like a match
Right at the edge
I want the burn
I want the red

[Chorus]
Ash on velvet
Stay on me
Ash on velvet
Don’t set me free
Close enough to break
Soft enough to keep
Ash on velvet
Baby, sleep with me
(Ash on velvet)
(Ash on velvet)

[Bridge]
Let the room go dark
Let the record crack
If you leave a mark
I’m not giving back
You can haunt my skin
You can take your time
I was born to fall
If you call it mine

[Final Chorus]
Ash on velvet
Stay on me
Ash on velvet
Don’t set me free
Close enough to break
Soft enough to keep
Ash on velvet
Baby, sleep with me
(Ash on velvet)
(Ash on velvet)