


How can I build this sealed pool better?
This was my prerelease deck. The first picture is the build I played at the event (the two Thorin's Last Stand are sideboard.) The second picture is the rest of my pool.
I tried to build Red-White Storied Dwarf artifact/equipment theme but didn't meet with much success. I will admit that my gameplay skills could use some improving and I made some elementary mistakes while playing out the games, so it could have been due to that.
Is there something better I could have built from this pool? A different set of colors, perhaps? Is the Red-White archetype just not that strong? Any suggestions would be helpful. :-)