
Very rough draft of a song! Would love some specific feedback.
Hi all,
I am in the process of writing new music and compiling them in (very rough) drafts on Soundcloud. I'd love some feedback (but please be gentle). I am not sure if this is the right tempo for this song To me, it feels a bit rushed. I also don't know if the guitar riffs are too redundant after each verse, if it's too weird....all of the above, haha! My partner also said that "hopper girl" didn't denote what I thought it did, so I would be curious for anyone's feedback on what they feel the meaning of the title is. Thank you! Please keep in mind that this is a very rough draft recording!
u/SavoirFaireGuitar — 4 days ago