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summer night / moths dizzy by the incense / rosary beads turn in old hands
summer night—
moths dizzy by the incense
rosary beads turn in old hands
u/Scholiastic — 4 days ago
summer night—
moths dizzy by the incense
rosary beads turn in old hands
autumn trees—
the old sweeper woman
curdling leaves
summer evening—
train window holds
smudged fields
pastel blue sky—
the dog's shadow
melts into mine
My haiku effort is meant to be read with the extended brief pause, the em dash.