This Is The End For Me

This is a song I wrote last night in about 20 minutes or so. I still need to make some revisions but I wanted to share the initial rough draft.

I was inspired to write this after reading a Facebook post about a woman who passed away during the 9/11 attacks while I was also listening to the My Chemical Romance album Danger Days: The True Lives Of The Fabulous Killjoys. The particular song that gave me the inspiration to write this is called Save Yourself, I'll Hold Them Back. What do you guys think?

(Verse)

Oh, hello

'Cause this is the last goodbye

And the tears, they rain like Hell

From the other side

And the screams

Like a tidal wave of serenades 

Rising up in fire lights

We can't run away

Tonight, tonight

(Chorus)

Think I see how this one goes

Will you remember me

When the blaze is burning low

Just don't forget me

(Never forget me)

(Post Chorus)

Don't cry

For this is the end for me

Be the Phoenix in the darkness

Can you rise above this hate

From the ashes

(Verse)

Oh, my dear

Is it worse than what they're saying

'Cause I just can't seem to hear

From the other side

A bad dream

Waiting out the end of days now

And the towers burned on down

And I can't run away

Tonight, tonight

(Chorus)

Think I see how this one goes

Will you remember me

When the blaze is burning low

Just don't forget me

(Never forget me)

No,

Think I see how this one goes

Will you remember me

When the blaze is burning low

Please remember me

(Never forget)

(Bridge)

We stand upon the ground

With the lovers and the zeros, baby, now

The eulogy is what they always had in mind

Just say

Did they break on through the barrio

Like a city built on damage control

These lies take the best of me

Will I fade into the sky

(It's up to you to pull me back

It's up to you

To pull me out of the void)

(Chorus)

Think I see how this one goes

Will you remember me

When the blaze is burning low

Just don't forget me

(Never forget me)

No,

Think I see how this one goes

Will you remember me

When the blaze is burning low

Please remember me

(Don't leave me here my love

Don't leave me here my love)

(Outro)

And please don't cry

For this is the end for me

Be the Phoenix in the darkness

Can you rise above this hate

From the ashes

Please don't cry

For this is the end for me

Be the Phoenix in the darkness

Can you rise above this hate

From the ashes

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What do you guys think?

This is a simple punk song I wrote about two weeks ago called Blood And Coffee. I was inspired by a newer Green Day song called Ballyhoo.

It's about how there's so much chaos in the world and how even though we're all aware of what's happening so many people are afraid to step in and try to make a difference, it's easier to hide in the shadows until it goes away. The spilling of blood has become as casual as sipping a cup of coffee.

(Verse)

Shoot 'em up, come on, shoot it up

Another one down and we're hitting the go-go

Blow it up, baby, rip it up

And dance La Cucaracha in and out the chalk outlines

(Pre Chorus)

And if we pay no mind walking down the line

It was never even our business

Sirens ringing out into the night

And God bless all of the other victims

(Chorus)

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn down the volume on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time I won't pay no vision

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn up the static on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time then it's not my mission

(Verse)

Throw it up, come on, throw 'em up

And wave 'em in the air for the cops that don't care

Give it up, baby, raise 'em up

Extinguish valiance and post that we're all in danger

(Chorus)

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn down the volume on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time I won't pay no vision

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn up the static on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time then it's not my mission

(Bridge)

And if we pay no mind walking down the line

It was never even our business

Sirens ringing out into the night

And God bless all of the other victims

(Chorus)

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn down the volume on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time I won't pay no vision

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn up the static on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time then it's not my mission

(It's not my mission

It's not my mission)

Join me now for blood and coffee

Turn up the static on your television

Out of site, all is out of mind

Until it's my time then it's not my mission

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u/Specialist-Green-850 — 8 days ago

What are you guys' most misheard lyrics?

I've made a post like this a few years ago and today I realized that I've always thought in Desensitized when he says "I wanna watch a bomb" he's saying "I wanna watch your mom."

I guess my brain thought this was Voyeur by blink-182.

Anyways, what are some of you guys' most misheard lyrics from GD or their side projects?

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u/Specialist-Green-850 — 27 days ago

So I've seen a lot of cartoons where characters interact with a geyser. One thing that happens a lot on cartoons is when someone walks over or sits on a geyser and it goes off they get launched high into the air. I think if you're standing in a geyser when it goes off, you should get launched into the air maybe like 10 blocks or something. It should effect items as well, which could be cool for item transport. Idk what do you guys think?

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