u/Substantial_Boss824

So my Mc is the central character but when my writing buddy read my story she told me my mc didn't feel like the mc more like everyone else was because of the way I wrote it.

And I don't know whether I did it or purpose or not because my character is emotionless(basically really hard to make entertaining) and this my first time writing a character type like this so I instead focused on my side characters and how they saw him. I'm writing from 3rd person omniscient so I can do this.

Though I have to say I really love that she and others said that because it so interesting and unique from my other writing because it forces me to make my side characters more deverse and interesting and unique themselves