Breathless - short - 7 pages

Mainly looking for feedback relating to the story and how it reads for you guys as I am pitching this in my class and I really want to direct.

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u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 11 hours ago

Breathless - 7 pages

Looking to direct in my next class so I want to make sure this can be as good as possible.

I know formatting will need work but if I can just get opinions on how the story is.

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u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 17 days ago

Tonight it all ends.

It’s over Luis.

I know your reading this.

It’s done.

The system is coming down.

All you corrupt mods are going down.

The island was never safe. The truth will be revealed.

u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 2 months ago

Is this package good enough for a short student film?

Hello, looking to rent for first time and hoping to get a good look for our short film, just wanted to know if this package is good including the actual light?

u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 3 months ago

Is a BOYA/Rode shotgun mic, a boom pole and a zoom recorder the necessary stuff to capture decent audio ?

Hello everyone, making a short film with my friends this summer and mainly focusing on lights and sound especially sound which I know is important, me and my friends do have small experience with using mics and recorders from school but this time we’re on our own so I want to know if this is all I would really need. Thanks.

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u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 3 months ago

Sundown - short film || 6 pages ||

Looking for feedback as I am planning on making this a short film with my friends : ) would appreciate it.

Logline: On the day of their separation, two young women try to preserve their fading bond as a new dawn approaches for them both.

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u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 3 months ago

MOONLIGHT - 6 pages - feedback

Looking to make a short film this summer but struggling as to which incarnation of this story is better. Looking for any feedback as I want to make sure this is good for filming.

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u/TOMMYMILLEROK — 3 months ago