Breathless - short - 7 pages
Mainly looking for feedback relating to the story and how it reads for you guys as I am pitching this in my class and I really want to direct.
Mainly looking for feedback relating to the story and how it reads for you guys as I am pitching this in my class and I really want to direct.
Looking to direct in my next class so I want to make sure this can be as good as possible.
I know formatting will need work but if I can just get opinions on how the story is.
It’s over Luis.
I know your reading this.
It’s done.
The system is coming down.
All you corrupt mods are going down.
The island was never safe. The truth will be revealed.
Hello, looking to rent for first time and hoping to get a good look for our short film, just wanted to know if this package is good including the actual light?
Hello everyone, making a short film with my friends this summer and mainly focusing on lights and sound especially sound which I know is important, me and my friends do have small experience with using mics and recorders from school but this time we’re on our own so I want to know if this is all I would really need. Thanks.
Looking for feedback as I am planning on making this a short film with my friends : ) would appreciate it.
Logline: On the day of their separation, two young women try to preserve their fading bond as a new dawn approaches for them both.
Looking to make a short film this summer but struggling as to which incarnation of this story is better. Looking for any feedback as I want to make sure this is good for filming.