u/The4thPersona

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200,000 years before humanity was born. 

A red planet with a human-like species dead set on conquering new lands and other worlds worked tirelessly making and engineering weapons and vehicles that would change the trajectory of reality. 

From the beginning of their world they devoted their rage and greed to other, more productive things instead of going to war with each other and making their own world and race dwindle. So when they agreed to work together for better ways of life and discovering new forms of energy and technology, they resorted to something they call Taaran in human tongue but translates to invasion. 

They spent 50 years developing advanced flight technology and light projection weaponry to begin their first true mission and assault through the cosmos. They created probes that aimlessly scoured through the vast reaches of the universe in all directions without an ounce halting.

Once they finished scouring through the universe they all flew back to their original home and gave atleast 3,000 pieces of information of different worlds and the species and the rare precious material. They sent fleets composed of 500 soldiers and 1 commander to attack and invade many worlds with materials they wanted. They subjected multiple billions of lives to slavery until they either died or became useful enough to keep alive in their empire. Some species with 1, 0 or more than 1 eyes were used as enslaved soldiers meant to fight for the empire and do their dirty work which lasted for 480 years. They continued to do this to every world in the milky way until only half of the galaxy was taken over, which left 50% of the galaxy left. The Arkan Empire (Astro Empire) had many defectors that tried to persuade or start a rebellion which ultimately failed due to most of the empire's soldiers and leaders being so stuck up and prideful, which made these rebellions short lived. The longest known rebellion lasted around 2 hours until its soldiers and leaders were sentenced to death. 

Year 2000..humanities era. 

By the time it was the year 2000 for humanity the Arkan Empire already became a type 2.6 civilization. 

“To fight is the right to enlight. To disobey is to die, and cry. To conquer is the truth for which shall be shared. All shall be ours!!!” Is the Arkan oath. 

The most respected commander in arka is commander Gar-inM-an or Gman for short was the strongest, the bravest and most of all the smartest as he has spent 30,000 years of his life to serve the Empire and gain the respect of the emperor. Gman used the environment and his own soldiers as leverage and advantage against stronger foes to best them in the ring of honor. He took out entire cities all by himself and even made 23 species across 15 worlds go extinct by himself as he knew that he was already good enough to annihilate the other worlds. When he was sent to a green planet full of anthropomorphic creatures he thought to himself that he could take some of them home as pets or maybe a trophy of victory. And that, he did exactly. He drove that world to near extinction because he knew they were too weak on their own and such a waste of a civilization should be eradicated to make the universe perfect in the Arkans own minds. He killed 45 trillion of these creatures in the span of 6 earth cycles which is impressive yet scary given that he's but a mere commander compared to an emperor which says a lot about the empire's true power. He brought home 2 creatures one feline and one canine, the feline was pregnant with 4 children, Gman felt bad about his new pets not being able to have children if they were to be transported to new bodies which is why he ordered his top bio engineers to extract the unborn children and give them new DNA and growth chambers to make sure his pets would have children and make sure he can build his own army one day. Both canine and feline were given new bodies, capable of producing power and abilities that they never dreamed of having. He named the canine Threshor and the feline Ambra which meant Terror and annihilation in his native tongue. 

The combination of red and orange suits well with the 2. They served as the gmans guardians in battle but to only be deployed under serious conditions. Threshor was especially great in combat, even comparable to Gman himself as he is a true warrior. Gman brought threshor along for the duration of 10,000+ years fighting and conquering worlds and as they gained a friendship together they thought of themselves as brothers that could never be separated unless one of them had died. 

This Is part 1.

This community has gone to shit over months of coping and downfall left and right.

I'm leaving this damned community. What a shame to see everything crumble to dust and blow away. Sure it's also invises fault too but some of the fans just go on a full bandwagon effect..

Man I'm gonna miss this place. Probably won't, but I hope in like 2 years when I return its probably not as bad any more. Or not idk..

Cya!

I bet you wont~

Context: astral sword can kill gods. gods are universal power and above. So jomboBUM claims those gods that died to the sword were only building level. LITERALLY DOESN'T MAKE SENSE

i made this because when my clan fought another team only 1 citadel was left and it was tearing us apart.

The infamous gore

He has reached a new low.

hes gonna watch this rip off version NOOOOOO

u can see in the chat

mod said because i didnt include spoiler tag. but thats bs because everyone else didnt even have the spoiler tag. all i said was that new ep was good in MY opinion.

through episode 14 and 18 i noticed tsm had 1 parasite. yall are saying its like scientist bookmans mutated tsm version, but we all know thats stupid. so im assuming its like doms tcm parasite, which means they have to kill tsm to disinfect him.

My au is called. Eradication. Btw can I get some actual questions about my au instead of "cool" or "nice" please.

The fathership is a planet eater that only takes out planets if truly necessary like if it has a plague that Astros can't properly contain or if it's environment is completely unlivable. So it eats planets and seperates rare material from useless material. For data collection and researching. It doesn't beam or shoot. It only opens up it's mouth to eat when told to.

The eradicator is an aerial defense system that pushes back or completely destroys incoming threats from beyond the Astro planets atmosphere. Basically like stopping foreign space invaders or asteroids or meteors. It also serves as a place to make new tech and weaponry.

Leave ideas, thoughts or questions below.

Astro wraiths are the ones who created the tech for detainers claws. They serve as the technicians and engineers for the empire. They also invented warp tech and biomechanical compatibility which is how they add their toilet bodies on mechanical bodies like the Duchess.

Astro guardians are the ones who guard and protect the empress and emperor. They will risk their own lives for them to the point where it's like a competition to see who can protect them the best. They also serve as judges who decide whether someone in the empire gets executed, banished or freed. There are only 28 guardians out of the other 36 who are off world carrying out acts of mass genocide.

Height:

Astro wraiths: 40 - 80 meters

Astro guardians: 290 meters

Weight:

Astro wraiths: 50 tons

Astro guardians: 330 tons

IQ (in terms of human iq):

Wraiths: 598 iq

Guardians: 359 iq

Speed:

Wraiths: 32 - 5000 mph

Guardians: 20 mph to light speed

BRO HES COOKED.