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Story Beats Feedback

Hi folks, I'm looking for feedback on the first major beats for the next chapter of The Blank Scroll.

Art, coloring, and text/balloons polish are all works in progress. I'm looking for feedback primarily on story clarity, and especially handling all the exposition in the last few pages here.

If anything is unclear about what's going on please ask.

u/TheBlankScroll — 1 day ago
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Readability?

Here's one of my recent pages, I'm curious how well it reads visually out of context.

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u/TheBlankScroll — 19 days ago