u/Tough_Raise4813

what the altar asks

you arrived dressed as a shepherd
and i was a lamb with a broken leg.
tell me,
how was i supposed to know
the wolf had learned scripture?

you spoke in the language of healing.
wrapped commandments in ribbons
and tied them around my wrists.
i wore them proudly.
mistaking strings for stitches.
mistaking obedience for recovery.

you fed me rules
like they were medicine.
five stars hanging above my head
like constellations.
i spent nights reaching for them
until my arms gave out.
you called it effort.
i called it devotion.

i built a shrine from your approval.
lit candles with shaking hands.
watched the wax drip onto my skin
and thanked god for the warmth
while it burned me.

the thing about cages
is they start to feel holy
when somebody tells you
they were built to keep you safe.
so i kissed the bars.
called them protection.
called them guidance.
called them love.
anything but what they were.

i wore obedience like a halo.
the metal rusted into my skin.
when i bled,
you called it progress.
and i fucking believed you.
god,
i believed you.

you taught me recovery
like a dog learns tricks.
sit.
stay.
roll over.
good girl.
good girl.
good girl.
until the day i couldnt perform
and suddenly i was feral.

i buried my failures in the garden.
by spring,
they had grown your voice.
every flower leaned toward me
and whispered
not enough.

somewhere along the way
my recovery stopped belonging to me.
my pulse answered to your approval.
my worth answered to your anger.
and i became so afraid of losing you
that i called it healing.

i mistook the leash for a lifeline.
held it against my chest
and wondered why i couldn't breathe.

they asked me what was so good about you.
i searched your pockets
for something worth all the bruises.
a miracle.
a map.
a reason.
but all i found
were the promises
id put there myself.

i searched your pockets for gold
only to find my own coins.

somewhere,
there's a version of me
who never answered your message.
she sleeps through the night.
she doesn't count her worth
in completed tasks.
she doesn't mistake fear
for devotion.
she doesn't kneel
at altars that demand pieces of her
in exchange for mercy.

and somewhere,
there's a graveyard full of teeth.
every piece of myself
i bit out and left behind
just to make room for you.

now the candles have burned out.
the ribbons have come undone.
the shepherd has lost his flock.
and for the first time,
i can see the wolf
without the scripture.

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u/Tough_Raise4813 — 23 hours ago

the planet next door is laughing

everyone lives on their own planet.

mine is all sirens
that never quite arrive.

the sky learns the colour
of waiting.

on the planet next to mine
they laugh at nothing really
they ask who’s completing assignments

through my telescope
i watch a child cry
because he stole a marker.

his world shakes.

theirs
doesn’t even tilt.

i scream until my throat
becomes another kind of silence.

maybe sound can't travel
through whatever space
exists between our planets.

maybe that's why
no one looks up.

he said
he'd never hurt me again.

he cried.
he apologised.
he filled my hands with gifts
as if they could outweigh
the gravity of memory.

but my body
still orbits that night.

a year later,
i'm still circling it.

because healing
was supposed to happen
on safe ground.

instead,
every morning
i wake up
on the same planet.

different victim.
same sky.

i am on a different planet
from everyone else in my home
while they move through the same rooms
as if nothing is wrong

what happens here
is so normalised
it can be disguised
as discipline

and i am the only one awake
enough to notice the cracks in it
the way it bends light wrong
the way it hurts but still gets called ordinary

they don’t see it.
or maybe they learned not to.

i did not get that choice.

they ask me
why i'm not trying harder.

how do i leave
when the thing i'm running from
is the air?

how do i learn
the world is gentle
when every day
another door slams shut,
another child flinches,
another planet burns
while everyone else
continues spinning
as though fire
is just another season?

sometimes
i think about becoming
my own disaster.

if the universe insists
on breaking me,
maybe i should do it first.

at least then

someone
might finally notice
there was a planet here
all along.

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