As the title suggests this is the first chapter of the first draft of the first novel I'm writing, and I feel that the pacing could be improved, I just have no idea how. I would very much appreciate honest, brutal feedback, no need for sugarcoating at all.
Reddit probably isn't the best place to look for a genuine connection(romantic or otherwise) but I'm lonely af so here goes nothing
I'm a 22y/o trans guy who's pre-t but thanks to genetics looks presents pretty much androgynous/masculine(my voice is disasterous tho 😂). I'd pass if I cut my hair shorter but I live in a transphobic country so at the moment I'm just rocking the androgynous vibes with medium long hair.
I'm bi, 5'8(around 172-173cm), on the skinny side, East Asian, a history major currently in uni, a huge gamer, something of a nerd. I have a playful personality and enjoy being affectionately ridiculed by a more no-nonsense type of person.
I don't care about race/nationality and am very open to LDR but the ultimate goal of course would be to meet irl.
Sexual stuff is fine but I'd rather not sext from the start since at the moment I'm not looking for a horny chat that goes nowhere.