u/UsedFaithlessness458

This is what I have wrote for the beginning of my essay. I kind of like what i have going so far but I need outside input! Please lmk if I should start over or if I have something I need to continue!!

Oranges are my favorite fruit. A hybrid native to Asia, most notably grown in California, is made of 5 elements that work together to create the solid shape and function of the known orange today. As I reflect on the foundational components of this fruit I realize that not only are they the forces that keep an Orange together but represent the individual mechanics in my life that built me to be who I am today.“.

Please lmk honestly how u feel. Any feedback or suggestions is welcome pls