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Naturally

I fell in love with you, and I thought of bioluminescence. How a chemical reaction can make something light up from within, and I smiled when I realized that was what it felt like to love you. How some things don’t glow despite being disturbed, but because of it.

I thought of mycelium. How two unique mycelia can join together and create a n entire network that they never could have made alone. I thought about how the interconnectedness of mycelium is what it feels like to love you.

I thought of neurons. Neurons swirling around inside my skull, and I wondered if they form hearts when I think of you? I thought about the fact that thinking about you makes my body light up from within, and about how that’s exactly what it feels like.

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u/Vegetable_Egg_8569 — 2 days ago

Naturally

Naturally

I fell in love with you, and I thought of bioluminescence. How a chemical reaction can make something light up from within, and I smiled when I realized that was what it felt like to love you. How some things don’t glow despite being disturbed, but because of it.

I thought of mycelium. How two unique mycelia can join together and create a n entire network that they never could have made alone. I thought about how the interconnectedness of mycelium is what it feels like to love you.

I thought of neurons. Neurons swirling around inside my skull, and I wondered if they form hearts when I think of you? I thought about the fact that thinking about you makes my body light up from within, and about how that’s exactly what it feels like.

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u/Vegetable_Egg_8569 — 2 days ago

Naturally

I dont really engange with poetry stuff, but i liked this, so feedback and thoughts are welcome!

Naturally

I fell in love with you, and I thought of bioluminescence. How a chemical reaction can make something light up from within, and I smiled when I realized that was what it felt like to love you. How some things don’t glow despite being disturbed, but because of it.

I thought of mycelium. How two unique mycelia can join together and create a n entire network that they never could have made alone. I thought about how the interconnectedness of mycelium is what it feels like to love you.

I thought of neurons. Neurons swirling around inside my skull, and I wondered if they form hearts when I think of you? I thought about the fact that thinking about you makes my body light up from within, and about how that’s exactly what it feels like.

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u/Vegetable_Egg_8569 — 2 days ago

I dont really engange with poetry stuff, but i liked this, so feedback and thoughts are welcome!

Naturally

I fell in love with you, and I thought of bioluminescence. How a chemical reaction can make something light up from within, and I smiled when I realized that was what it felt like to love you. How some things don’t glow despite being disturbed, but because of it.

I thought of mycelium. How two unique mycelia can join together and create an entire network that they never could have made alone. I thought about how the interconnectedness of mycelium is what it feels like to love you.

I thought of neurons. Neurons swirling around inside my skull, and I wondered if they form hearts when I think of you? I thought about the fact that thinking about you makes my body light up from within, and that’s exactly how it feels.

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/dK6A2mdhsz

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/0O8cfjz4I1

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u/Vegetable_Egg_8569 — 2 days ago